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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
1/4/2005 9:47:43 PM
Excellent portrait.. Love the highlight on the hair, it really lifts the texture. However (ain't there always a "however" ?! ) It looks a little like she is standing behind a pair or curtains, and has drawn them up around her, allowing only the "obvious" parts to show.
Personally, I would have provided a little fill/rim light behind her to show the shoulder/neck line thus creating a little more shape.
All "art" is conceptual though, and if this is exactly what you wanted to achieve, then well done!
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| Photo By: Paul Childerhouse
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
12/20/2004 7:28:35 PM
Original version looked like this...Not too sure which one I prefer, although the framing is not 100% but thought I would share anyway.
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
12/9/2004 10:44:50 PM
Paul
Thanks for the comment! agree with the debris.. as for the fold.. I was in 2 minds on this..
First impression was to remove it, but I decided to leave it as it's more "womanly" IMO. There is too much negative imagery around that forces girls to have "the perfect body" when in reality, there are folds and curves!
I'm sure someone else will prove me wrong though!
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
6/15/2004 1:19:33 PM
To be fair, Stonehenge IS on a hill, so unless we want to work against the forces of nature and the Druids, perhaps it's best left well alone!
Excellent capture 
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
4/6/2004 1:59:29 PM
Speechless! Stunning...
I would have perhaps bounced a small amount of light onto the other side of her face BUT, that was not (I think) what you were going for and just my personal preference....
Well done
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| Photo By: frans jacobs
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
3/25/2004 2:08:42 PM
1 comment after 24 views? I am a little disappointed to be honest!
I know it's not the best shot ever, but that's the whole point of this site is it not? I hope usefilm is not becoming "eliteist" and therefore not giving us newbies the constructive crit that we all so crave!
If 10 of your friends tell you that your pictures are good then perhaps they are just being nice, the point of putting myself in the public eye like this is so that total strangers will give me honest comments.
Or do people prefer to say nothing rather than be harsh about someones work?
C'mon people! Tear me to pieces here!
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| Photo By: John Masters
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
3/25/2004 12:26:29 PM
Stunning! Please share your lighting secrets!
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| Photo By: Richard Koch
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
3/25/2004 12:20:30 PM
Beautiful capture, would only be improved if the model was looking round and up at the lens, I am left wanting to see her angelic face...
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
3/4/2004 10:40:03 AM
Hey! A fellow Dimage User! Lovely light, great concept
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
6/18/2003 10:16:05 AM
could someone translate the above comment for me please?
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
5/17/2003 4:49:29 AM
Nothing constyucive to add here other than I used to live in Spain when I was younger, so it bought back a few memories!
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
5/16/2003 6:35:39 AM
Once again, thank you..! I guess a lot of stuff is down to individuals personal taste, I am yet to develop my own "style" so am unaware of what is "commercially" appealing. Should I continue to take shoys in this style?!? comments please.
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Critique By:
John Masters (K:71)
5/16/2003 5:54:12 AM
Thank you for that....that is exactly the type of input I am looking for, and thanks for taking it the extra mile and making a change for me to demonstrate what you meant!!
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