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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
9/6/2004 11:37:55 PM
that too will work...
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| Photo By: Ivan Jimenez
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
9/3/2004 3:22:26 PM
Ivan and Ray, I see what you're talking about but disagree. Seems that the one thing that's missing for me is the lack of contrast. Looks like there's a little bit of vignetting on the left of the frame but it looks like a Photoshop addition (correct me if I'm wrong). Also, I like how dark her hair is versus the guy behind her.
I think this photo would really pop if there was a tad bit more contrast, a little tasteful and subtle dodging and burning, leave the back groun in color, and ditch the vignetting (or do it a little more subtley).
This is indeed a great image. Can't wait to see what happens to it. Experiment.
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| Photo By: Ivan Jimenez
(K:9078)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
8/27/2004 9:30:22 PM
I don't know if there's supposed to be a little humor in this photo but I find it delightful. There's something playful about the mood of this image. I love how stark it is too. Empty. Great. This is a great image.
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| Photo By: Paco Ferrer
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
8/18/2004 2:46:40 AM
as i agree this is a great image, i wonder one thing. how does everyone in this critique thread know that it's a candid photo?
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| Photo By: rami rami
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
7/28/2004 4:23:37 PM
Yes, but steam coming out of the kettle would be the obvious move here. A little too cliche.
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| Photo By: Cindi Czaja
(K:5314)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
7/28/2004 4:20:10 PM
Hey Cindi. This photo. It seems that this photo characterizes that attitude that you keep telling me to push for. There's just enough face to make you wonder what else is under there. Very nice.
More like this. And I agree, you should be in front of the camera just as much as behind it.
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| Photo By: Cindi Czaja
(K:5314)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
7/13/2004 12:02:22 AM
What is she doing to that man?
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| Photo By: John W. Yeomans
(K:36)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
7/11/2004 5:28:27 PM
Pedro, what do you mean about the jpg quality could be better? Looks just fine on my screen. And besides, it's a LOMO.
Great shot. I love how trashy it is. Especially with the bits of trash at her feet. Have to love those Philly girls. They sure know how to party.
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| Photo By: John W. Yeomans
(K:36)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
7/3/2004 7:35:20 PM
Perfect subject matter for the Holga. This is great.
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| Photo By: Tim Courlas
(K:486)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
7/3/2004 3:53:31 PM
The toothbrush. Oh the toothbrush. Gives it something. John this one's amazing.
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| Photo By: John W. Yeomans
(K:36)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
6/28/2004 1:49:14 AM
I'd liike to protose a toagst. It has begun.
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| Photo By: John W. Yeomans
(K:36)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
6/23/2004 9:00:50 PM
yeah. so would i. good thinking.
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| Photo By: Gabrielle Willson
(K:7978)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
6/18/2004 9:22:04 PM
This photo is my favorite of your collection here Bob. These colors are fantastic.
More Zeiss Bob.
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| Photo By: Bob Marcus
(K:390)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
5/7/2004 1:07:43 PM
Awesome. Thanks. More you WILL see (soon).
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| Photo By: Tim Stevens
(K:642)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
4/5/2004 9:58:41 PM
keep them coming. these are great. i love learning about your family.
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| Photo By: john lee
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
3/29/2004 2:51:52 PM
I've heard it said that shoes on wires mean drugs. I don't know what specifically it has to do with drugs other than it means drugs.
But my guess is that it's just kids having fun in the city.
Love the Lomo. Love the colors that it pulls from the sky. Nice image. Great orange vs. blue. Good shot.
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| Photo By: mac davis
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
3/24/2004 2:17:11 PM
God, that's creepy. How'd you do it?
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| Photo By: Darinka Montico
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
3/15/2004 7:20:32 AM
Bet it looks better coming up than it does going down...
Great image. Great title. Mmmmm.
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| Photo By: Jacques Herman
(K:32)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
3/15/2004 7:17:59 AM
i like how you call them a "nice" couple. because i know them and yes, they ARE nice...
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| Photo By: Marc Santosusso
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
3/7/2004 10:48:07 AM
This is great too. You've got guts.
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| Photo By: john lee
(K:87)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
3/7/2004 10:34:02 AM
that's hilarious. great job. GREAT title.
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| Photo By: john lee
(K:87)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
3/7/2004 9:56:44 AM
This takes me back to a location from the Star Wars Trilogy (the good episodes, 4, 5 & 6). Almost feels that there should be three suns at sunset in the sky. Love the darkness. Adds a great kind of mystery to it. There's great subtle richness in the clouds that you really have to find. Very nice. More, Marc, MORE! Hee-ya!
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| Photo By: Marc Santosusso
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
2/22/2004 11:14:44 AM
I'm not quite sure why you've decided to blur a bit of the grass here. I think the image would be fine with out it.
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| Photo By: Jorge Vasconcelos
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
2/8/2004 1:04:01 AM
Hey Cindi,
Long time, no speak...
For some reason, the comments that you sent me on the one Miss Argentina photo were deleted. Can't say why. They all were.
Anyway, LOVE this shot. I love this lighting. The kid's eyes are amazing. Great capture. I think that this is my most favorite of yours. I'd love to see more like this one. What else do you have?
Hope all is well. Speak to you soon.
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| Photo By: Cindi Czaja
(K:5314)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
2/1/2004 6:00:46 PM
YEAH! I love it. Way to get right in there.
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| Photo By: Angela Galbraith
(K:0)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
1/24/2004 7:29:43 AM
wonderful color. great reds on that blue. great hard shadow on the left.
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| Photo By: Samuele Paladini
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
1/14/2004 11:34:41 AM
I know I'm a little late on this one but I LOVED reading this entire thread. Good work to those of you who actually did the research before writing comments. Bad work for those of you who condemned, assumed, and generalized.
Let's keep up the argument. I'll go first.
Who really pulled the trigger on JFK?
GO!
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| Photo By: Francisco Mata Rosas
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
1/14/2004 11:19:06 AM
Great. Vignetting is wonderful. The DOF is wonderful. Love the kid on the sliding board. Great composition. This is a great image. You've found yourself a really nice Holga there. Let's hope you can get a few more rolls out of it before it breaks.
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| Photo By: Tim Courlas
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
1/14/2004 11:17:12 AM
Wow. I love it. Are the cars there all of the time? What a great photo. I'll definitely have to go there someday.
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| Photo By: Tim Courlas
(K:486)
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Critique By:
Tim Stevens (K:642)
1/13/2004 12:57:30 PM
This is a great image. Wow. Gives me vertigo. Great composition. Way to look at things differently. Funny thing about those kinds of cameras that I find to be a blessing is that sometimes they find their own compositions.
Great image. It'd be really neat 20" x 20" matted and nicely framed on a wall.
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| Photo By: Jane Harris
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