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Critique By:
peter dolan (K:104)
7/20/2004 7:42:06 PM
Wonderful. It reminds me of abstract expressionism, which in a way it is considering the techniques (splatter painting). The twist, throwing it on an everyday surface using waste, is interesting though. Seems to have a portentious message for us.
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| Photo By: Andrew Caldwell
(K:18307)
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Critique By:
peter dolan (K:104)
7/20/2004 7:39:10 PM
Fantastic! Reminds me of Andy Warhol, or a nostalgic seeking after "the good old days" mixed with the more modern technology. Honesty through everyday techniques. Its vitality comes from its four-image juxtaposition.
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| Photo By: Andrew Caldwell
(K:18307)
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Critique By:
peter dolan (K:104)
7/20/2004 7:37:11 PM
I like the pattern in the posters, but it would fall down if it weren't supported by the patterns in the bottom and top of the frame. Don't crop.
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| Photo By: dennis ward
(K:431)
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Critique By:
peter dolan (K:104)
7/20/2004 7:35:51 PM
very nice, meditative. The large expanse of blackness is effective as a contrast
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| Photo By: Andrew Caldwell
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Critique By:
peter dolan (K:104)
7/20/2004 7:31:29 PM
I actually prefer the entire frame. The person a little bit alone in the center divides the group into two distinct interesting groups, which brings in a more complicated social dynamic. I'm not sure about so much black at the bottom though, I would probably reduce it by about 1/3. Nice sense of community.
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| Photo By: Pnar Yazicioglu
(K:7607)
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Critique By:
peter dolan (K:104)
6/26/2004 1:40:44 AM
Dramatic use of filters, the collusion of tones brings a comparison of the grass and the clouds, and of the rocks and the sky. I like it.
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| Photo By: Simon Crinks
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Critique By:
peter dolan (K:104)
6/26/2004 1:38:05 AM
I find this very interesting. It plays simultaneously with the fascination with subject matter, the problematic nature of photographic "realism" (through the color problems and the inclusion of the negative edges), the fascination with technical perfection, and the equipment fetish (through the film brand markings). I like that it doesn't make any conclusions. Keep up the good work!
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| Photo By: Simon Crinks
(K:-54)
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Critique By:
peter dolan (K:104)
6/19/2004 4:15:45 PM
haha, fun. If you wanted to have it mesh a little more, try going back to the toilet and have your friend crouch down in front of it and take it exactly the same way. Or not, it's fun
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| Photo By: Caserta Maurizio
(K:5)
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Critique By:
peter dolan (K:104)
4/7/2004 4:20:31 PM
I would like to see something in the lower-left corner to balance the strong clouds. The line of the water works well enough, but it needs a little support.
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
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