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Critique By:
Ben Mok (K:4084)
11/15/2005 1:00:09 PM
Hahah i don't agree with the boxing in one window thing  I like the other version more but it doesn't mean that this picture is not good. The smiles in this picture brings alot of warmth. A great picture for framing to put on the wall.
Regards,
Ben'
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Critique By:
Ben Mok (K:4084)
11/15/2005 12:54:45 PM
Both ladies are pretty, and the kids are so cute!
Each person's expression are so unique and yet blends in so well. I like this tight cropped version.
If you have any Indonesian UF meeting please let me know. I ll fly there from Australia to meet you all
Regards,
Ben
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Critique By:
Rendy Rendratno (K:442)
6/23/2005 12:35:39 AM
Thanks Rasheed, :-)
Beside sea water, dust & grit, I also worry about
what people might think, if I go to beach with a camera instead of towel, sun blocks and swim gear-
luckily mine is a small P&S - not likely to be used as a 'professional tools' (if you know what I mean ha..ha..)
have a nice day buddy!
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Critique By:
Rashed Abdulla (K:163889)
6/22/2005 6:43:20 AM
Dear Rendy ,this is a great image,not many people will dare to take their camera by the sea,in case the camera get sea water and damage,you did a great job here,i do like this capture,very best regards my friend..
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Critique By:
Rashed Abdulla (K:163889)
6/16/2005 9:27:24 AM
beautiful and very well captured,best regards.
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Critique By:
Galal El Missary (K:84569)
6/16/2005 9:00:03 AM
wonderful shot , well done .
Galal
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Critique By:
Stjepan Mikulic (K:669)
6/16/2005 8:48:11 AM
Beautiful composition and colors! Congrat
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Critique By:
Rendy Rendratno (K:442)
5/10/2005 1:47:51 AM
Thanks Marcio!
I guess when we are photographing people, they & circumstances will sometimes agree to align and form "a nice" picture...:-)
best regards,
Rendy
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Critique By:
Marcio Janousek (K:32538)
5/10/2005 1:26:59 AM
Very nice Rendy , good colors and moment..
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Critique By:
Rendy Rendratno (K:442)
4/11/2005 12:53:01 AM
Lae Hanggan, I forgot I focused to what at the time...ha..ha..(certainly not using auto)
I didnt mean to get the blurred effect (other than the moving clouds above due to long shutter opening) ..thanks for the improvement idea!
best regards, Rendy
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Critique By:
First Last (K:6897)
4/8/2005 11:48:13 PM
Beautiful portrait!
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Critique By:
Peter Griffen (K:526)
4/8/2005 7:51:48 PM
Beautiful portrait!!!!!
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
4/8/2005 5:30:23 PM
Boy. What a great portrait of a beatiful family!
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Critique By:
Hanggan Situmorang (K:24833)
4/8/2005 4:50:52 PM
Nice lighting and colors, Rendy. I think what Sony said is right, unless you intentionally want to make the blurred effect, which will be not too effective, in my opinion.
Congrats, keep uploading
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Critique By:
Joko Nugroho (K:480)
4/8/2005 12:32:06 PM
Very nice picture and composition! Selamat!
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Critique By:
Rendy Rendratno (K:442)
4/8/2005 7:10:44 AM
lae Situmorang and also for you all Roberto, CC, and Cessy:
Thanks for the encouraging comments!
I also literally 'gasping' in awe when I first opened
this file on my computer-what a genuine expression
Since that was a family gathering snapping - nobody there to direct the people. We just so happy because we could see each other (and having a very noisy lunch).
There's so much things to say to loved ones, muted by the separating distance and busy daily routines; yet there's so little time!
(Xmas holiday in Indonesia last 3~7 days only)
thanks again, have a nice day!
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Critique By:
cessy karina (K:14205)
4/8/2005 6:45:07 AM
very nice portrait, love the expressions
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Critique By:
c c (K:13449)
4/8/2005 6:43:17 AM
I love this!!! Your composition is so nice and I love the happy energy! Wonderful work!
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Critique By:
Roberto Arcari Farinetti (K:209486)
4/8/2005 6:39:38 AM
woowwww Rendy, hello, have a great portfolio so human!
and today this shot is in featured comment, for the just suggestion, but for me the shot is so delicate, intimate, so lovely!
also the light is so a great "halo".. nice is for you a aparadise family!
see you later..
roby
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Critique By:
Hanggan Situmorang (K:24833)
4/8/2005 4:38:21 AM
Aaah, so cute expressions captured here. Nice BW tones, as well. Congrats..
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Critique By:
Sony Kusumo (K:7190)
4/7/2005 9:55:40 AM
Well, portrait kan juga bisa boss..... nggak usah landscape (tapi jadi nggak lebar sih...).
Btw, do you ALWAYS need 4:3? Good art comes in many sizes buddy.....
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Critique By:
Rendy Rendratno (K:442)
4/7/2005 6:09:30 AM
No, I still need that true-to-the bones camera!
Loe sendiri udah punya duapuluh De, kapan belinya buseeet...!
Well, thanks for the encouraging comment man!
I try to cover half my monitor with the paper, re-think your composition; If I cut the Hilton Residence then I should have a MORE on the right
in order to obtain 4:3 picture;
the right side dont have a good view, and if I move to the road's center to avoid too much right view, I would too loose the parking cars (in-line, on purpose by a car club meeting at that place)
I guess I should move farther back - recompose,
and still get what I want...thanks ;-)
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Critique By:
Rendy Rendratno (K:442)
4/7/2005 5:59:12 AM
Trims mas,
aku sering dengar nama anda (jurnalis? profesional sih udah pasti) dimana ya?
Portofolionya = WOW ! Beautiful, object dan hasilnya!
Kapan ya aku bisa memotret se-profesional anda...mimpi kali ye?
salam, Rendy
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Critique By:
Benigno Bobby (K:-1679)
4/7/2005 5:37:03 AM
foto dokumentatif yg indah
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Critique By:
Sony Kusumo (K:7190)
4/7/2005 5:19:55 AM
A proof that you don't need large glass (or big-humongus camera as you mentioned, lol) to capture such gracious picture... Nice color and clouds (don't blame it on the towers my friend, if it's not because of the buildings, how could you make such dramatic picture like this??????)
Just a hint, to avoid leaning buildings (I don't know what the effect called), it's better to keep tall object in the middle part of the picture or use the PC lens. As in this one, I think it's better to crop the Hyatt Residence out of the picture, makes the entire scene more 'natural'.
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Critique By:
Sony Kusumo (K:7190)
4/7/2005 4:08:00 AM
Now this one is better my friend. Don't put family in one box, lol (on your previous picture, you make it as if you squeeze all those person in one window... just kidding though...).
Well, very nice lighting for your wife & son, but it seemed a bit overexposed on the other family... Guess you should process those two side separately and fixed them together, using the pole as stitching point....
Well, don't play PS too much, it can be addicted though....
Cheers!
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Critique By:
Rendy Rendratno (K:442)
4/6/2005 3:59:27 AM
Yes, I agree that some area are too white hot-but I'm a bit tight there, the boy on the left has a rather dark skin tone. I don't want him too look a-way-too dark than others - so I push up the curve (he's my son ha..ha..)
Thanks, Mike! Have a nice day!
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Critique By:
Mike Frakes (K:3349)
4/6/2005 3:49:13 AM
Fun! Nice capture! Maybe the white is a little hot, but the soft tones are relaxing.
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Critique By:
Rendy Rendratno (K:442)
4/6/2005 12:35:17 AM
Dear Sony, guess and try to recall my preferences
on that particular item...think..think....
Nope, you are wrong :-)
My wife is the one one the left.
The big smile boy is our son.
Sure, lets hunt together, but just wait
till I got a bigger, true-to-the-bones, camera..ha..ha..
tks, take care!
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Critique By:
Sony Kusumo (K:7190)
4/5/2005 5:25:42 PM
And your wife is..? one on the left? one on the right? Haven't seen her though....
Hey, Angela is right, the expression on the kids are priceless... Kids are adorable!
And blazing several shoots in a row is the power of digital.....
Cheers buddy!
Wanna do hunting together? Guess we should have an Indonesian UF member gathering....
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