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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
10/25/2007 10:27:03 PM
Great night scene, beautifully composed, nice blur on the vendor! Looks like your last film shot...
Just went digital, too - D40 with a 17-55mm lens (great lens!) Got some studio lights too. I'll post a few pix here from time to time... we miss Portugal terribly. Need port - tawny and white! Miss the beach bars at Espinho. Miss the steep streets of Oporto...
Stay well, keep shooting - ciao - N
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| Photo By: Miguel Marques
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
6/6/2007 8:25:02 PM
Boy, I do. A Sandy Nelson LP, of all things... teen beat. Nice nostalgic still life!
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Photo By: Dave Stacey
(K:150877)
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
6/4/2007 10:15:36 PM
Hi Wouter - this feels like a rabbit's eye view of a country road (!)-- tilted horizon and oversaturated color. I think this has potential (just my opinion) to be very good, because your exposure is just right, with detail in shadow and brightness. I would correct the colors, tone them down, take some of the blue out of the tree trunks, etc. Best wishes - N
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| Photo By: Wouter van Noort
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
6/4/2007 10:09:02 PM
Branimir - excellent eye for the right composition and moment. You do fine street photography.
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| Photo By: Branimir Fagarazzi
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
5/2/2007 9:41:47 PM
Beautiful, eye-catching, and very pleasing, but you have a horrible artifact here - a horizontal line 1/3 from the bottom, and it destroys the photo. Should be easy to fix!
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| Photo By: Jarek Kasprowiak
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
4/5/2007 11:40:53 PM
Beautiful shot, wonderful sense of light and tone, and dof taking us outside the room to the right. Excellent photo!
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| Photo By: Amal Abdul Aziz
(K:123)
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
3/2/2007 2:37:11 PM
Ah, beautiful beautiful Portugal! This is a wonderful shot, excellent level of saturation, great tones!
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| Photo By: Paulo Arrais
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
2/11/2007 9:45:54 PM
Hello Jan -- this is fun, and great composition (I like shooting eggs, too). A couple of distractions could go away -- the stencil or stamp on the left egg, and a couple of white specks in the pan. That ham looks lethal!! I enjoy this...
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| Photo By: Jan Hoffman
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
2/11/2007 1:57:11 PM
Hi Arian -- this is as good as it can be: perfect tone, light, composition, great DOF on all parts of her face while keeping the background out of focus. The eyelight is lovely, and her gentle expression. It also has a classical style... an excellent work!
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| Photo By: arian berisha
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
1/30/2007 10:43:44 PM
Terrific street shot and capture - a fine photograph with lots of character, expression and emotion. Just beautiful! Congrats!
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| Photo By: Jeno Apu
(K:1318)
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
1/6/2007 9:59:09 PM
Foto eccelente! Purtroppo multo triste.
Ciao - Ned
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| Photo By: Zirco
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
1/5/2007 11:23:43 PM
Wow, lots of comments! Yes, this is a good shot for the different colors and shell textures. Good!
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| Photo By: Srna Stankovic
(K:172232)
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
1/4/2007 7:16:11 PM
I like this shot, much for the light and the flecks of water on the cheek and arm, and the sense of beinf cold! Nice photo!
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| Photo By: Aniko Heart
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
1/4/2007 6:59:05 PM
This image is wonderful on the eye after repeated viewings. Fine art, indeed.
Yes, Williamstown, Victoria. His father emigrated from England and had a shipbuilding business... Cousins are variously MacKenzies, Whites, Cuthbertsons, scattered around Victoria and NSW...
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| Photo By: Aniko Heart
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
1/4/2007 6:28:08 PM
This is lovely - you have such variety of subjects and techniques!
My grandfather was born in Williamstown, btw... I've never been to Australia but I must someday -- plenty of cousins there!
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| Photo By: Aniko Heart
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
12/18/2006 11:51:58 AM
Fun photograph, and a fine machine! We have a '61 in the garage :)
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| Photo By: Donato Colucci
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
12/16/2006 4:43:55 PM
Absolutely beautiful!
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| Photo By: Serkan Yavuz
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
11/30/2006 6:18:10 PM
The balance (and arrangement) of color and form here is terrific - it's a great photo! The piece of hatband extending far left echoes the curve of her red shirt, and eye color, hatband, and hair offset the powerful reds. There's something extending from the far side of her lips that could be a distraction (it was for me) -- but overall this is a beautifully composed portrait. Best regards - N
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| Photo By: gina lowthert
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
11/29/2006 11:38:40 PM
Another great portrait. You're very good with people! This is first rate, full of intrigue, and a fine model.
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| Photo By: Sébastien Anex
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
11/29/2006 11:36:11 PM
Sebastien - I like your work a lot... this one is very strong, a great face streaked with (I guess) tears, and blurry adults behind. I'd love to know the circumstances of the photo -- who the other people are, why you chose to blur them out... I think this is a great shot, well done.
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| Photo By: Sébastien Anex
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
11/17/2006 6:41:53 PM
Wonderful detail of water and skin, and a great capture. Fine work.
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| Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
11/17/2006 6:40:19 PM
Yes, this is lovely... very strong composition this way and added mystery because of the quality of the light. Thanks for your reply!
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| Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
11/17/2006 6:12:06 PM
Hi Txules - this is a real eyecatcher, and I think a lot of it has to do with tonality and composition (which I think is fine). Have you tried cropping to straighten the horizon - or do you want the subtle effect that he is paddling uphill? Also (and this may be the intrinsic ghostliness of digital shots like these) the surfaces and tones feel metallic, which I feel inhibits the tranquility of the scene a bit. Still - just my opinion, and overall I think it's a beautiful piece.
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| Photo By: txules .
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
11/15/2006 12:08:24 AM
Nice shot, very poignant and strong sense of isolation... I used to live in NM and wished I had taken some photos like this one. One thought is, if you'd shot from a lower angle I think there might be more power in the composition, with the portable toilets rising up a bit and the mesas in middle background profiled by the sky... a series of small monoliths if you will. Otherwise, a fine photo.
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| Photo By: Dietmar Lange
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
11/14/2006 11:21:59 PM
Hello Dawn - I'll have to get there someday (we don't live too far...) I enjoy good photography of the "Old South" and this is a fine picture with good detail and a slightly forlorn feeling. Nice work.
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| Photo By: Dawn Stephens
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
11/14/2006 6:35:21 PM
Anindya - thanks for your comment, and I was happy to find this photo, which I think is an excellent portrayal of a family in a bad mood (!) The man (father?) looks a bit frightening in his dark shadows. A fine street photo. - Ned
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| Photo By: Anindya Maity
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
11/14/2006 6:17:53 PM
I love this - you have a great sense of tonality and character... a wistful mother with the boy holding his arm behond her head. A fine moment and good composition. - Ned
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| Photo By: Miladin Mare
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
8/27/2006 10:06:06 PM
Great soft tonality and light... the wall looks like a resting lion (!). This is beautiful country and you caught it at a great moment. Great photo, award-worthy. 
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| Photo By: Jo T
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
8/27/2006 9:23:08 PM
This is spectacular -- the sun glints in all the right places! Great action shot and wonderful light.
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| Photo By: tomasz lewandowski
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Critique By:
n white (K:-636)
8/26/2006 10:37:26 PM
Very pretty, moody, and evocative, with an angry (or at least irritated) sky. I like this a lot.
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| Photo By: Jo T
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