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RC. Dany
{K:64104} 6/27/2006
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Excellent .
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Nuwan Setunga
{K:178} 6/27/2006
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Hello. Its amazing what only becomes evident when someone else points it out! Thanks, i shall try to improve on these two as i think there is still some potential that can be squeezed out with photoshop. Thanks for the hlep guys, photography is definately more fulfilling with improvement. Nuwan.
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 6/27/2006
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This is a nicely framed image, but the problem I see is that the clouds are much brighter than your subject, and the eye keeps getting drawn upward.
If you applied a slight gradient layer to darken the sky, it would help keep the focus on her.
-Paul
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James Cook
{K:38068} 6/27/2006
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There are a lot of people willing to help you out with this one. It's amazing.
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Nuwan Setunga
{K:178} 6/27/2006
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Goran, there is definately more lighting on the subject, however I did want to preserve the yellow-ness of the sand in the picture, which is lost if i brighten the bottom part. Nuwan. Is the black and white version in my portfolio better?
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Goran Lepen
{K:1307} 6/27/2006
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Here's my version:
on the lower part I djusted the histogram, and on the upper part i used the Clarify effect from PaintShopPro v.9
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Nuwan Setunga
{K:178} 6/27/2006
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Hi Martina. What do you think about the black and white version of this same photo? I think the b & w convey the "lonliness" better.
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Martina W
{K:125} 6/27/2006
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I put a little more bright, sharpness and clarify. Picture has vivider and clearer colours. Regards.
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Nuwan Setunga
{K:178} 6/27/2006
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Hi Rashed. I like your recent beach pictures too, the hues are very appealing. Thanks! Nuwan.
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Rashed Abdulla
{K:163889} 6/27/2006
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great composition and very pleasant image to view, qll of the best my friend
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Nuwan Setunga
{K:178} 6/27/2006
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Hi James. Yes there are plenty of ways i could experiment with this pic with cropping and light. Have you looked at the black and white version of this picture (Lonely Beach). It is a horizontal version. Please tell me what you think. Thanks! Nuwan.
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Nuwan Setunga
{K:178} 6/27/2006
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Hi Martina. What did you do different in the pic you uploaded. Any advice is always appreciated! Nuwan.
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James Cook
{K:38068} 6/27/2006
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For the image at hand, I think a closer cropping would give a better final product.
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Martina W
{K:125} 6/27/2006
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Beautiful picture!! Graet shot. I agree with Goran, more contrast and sharpness would be a big adventage. Best wishes:)
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Nuwan Setunga
{K:178} 6/27/2006
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Hi. In fact i used a simple Sony cybershot DSC-L1 for all my digital pictures. I find that it takes shots with good clarity and equally good color that i dont need to invest in a larger camera. There are no filters at all that were used, or that can be bought for this camera (it houses a retractable lens). However, you are quite right. More lighting on the subject would have been much better, and im going to give it a try in photoshop when i get the chance. What do you think about my black and white version "lonely beach"? Thanks. Nuwan.
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Goran Lepen
{K:1307} 6/27/2006
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Very good composition, but I would prefer a bit more light on the girl, and more contrast in the clouds. Were you using a polarizing filter?
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