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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 3/8/2007
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marvelous tones. great detail. wonderful composition.
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Alicia Popp
{K:87532} 9/25/2006
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Estupenda Evaristo... formas, colores, luz... especiales!!
Felicitaciones por la captura!
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Evaristo E Mitchell
{K:511} 9/17/2006
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Thank you Melisa...Your rebel theory is in deed a very good one. I clearly see that this composition can be look at in so many different ways. But its original purpose is to be a romantic post-card. The unique grape represent a unique woman that stand above them all to someone. So the unique grape have to be above them all in any one of the four "rules of third" in composition. But you are so right; for a good rebel theory, all the grapes should be at the same level. Good input!
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Evaristo E Mitchell
{K:511} 9/17/2006
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Hello Joe...Thank you for the attention and comment. It was well received from you and others. When I joined this site I was hoping for this kind of input. This image is for a romantic post-card. It is to tell her that she is uniquely above them all. That is why the unique grape have to be above them all in anyone of the four "rule of third" in composition. So I appreciate your attention and very good input. Evaristo.
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Luke Luther
{K:14693} 9/13/2006
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Well Evaristo. I read the other comments. I like it from the outset...I think focus is a bit soft. Could be the water droplets. But what I really like is the symbolism that conveys your title. No place for that lonely purple grape to fit in with the neat orderly little society. I am not sure that being immersed in the mix would carry the same iconoclastic idea. Good work. Follow your bliss, Evaristo.
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z z
{K:7231} 9/12/2006
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Nice set up and the greens ones are so nicely formated. I like your version but also think the purple inbedded at the same formation as the green would make it seem like a rebel trying to fit in. :) There is always one in every bunch!
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Joe Johnson
{K:8529} 9/11/2006
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Since they are the same sized grape, another approach might be to place the red seedless among the green seedless, perhaps in some pattern. That would require more grapes and a wider shot. I don't comment on whether it's 'too dark or light' because people have their monitors adjusted all over the ballpark. But it might have more contrast, perhaps by sliding the high level over to the tail of the histogram.
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James Cook
{K:38068} 9/10/2006
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I like it. The ordered arrangement gives good stage for the purple grape. I might go a little darker with it? Anyway, keep up the good work.
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cessy karina
{K:14205} 9/10/2006
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very nice idea, but maybe the placement of the red grape could be more natural, and a little bit more contrast or play of lighting might enhance it.
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