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C W
{K:4458} 3/14/2007
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Ditto to what has already been said in regards to the contrast. All that aside, what a wonderful capture of the love between a father and daughter! Nice work!
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Felipe Anaya
{K:154} 11/26/2006
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I like them, specially that upper right corner I love it!
I see them too grayed, the baby face and you (I suppose) could be improved.
All teh Best!
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John William
{K:775} 10/23/2006
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Thanks for the words Mary. This group was fun to shoot and I guess I wanted to quickly mix them. (My wife actually created the collage) The pictures were cropped from color. I have a habit of making the backgrounds blacker then what is recommended. This collage maker is a cheap product (non Adobe CS), but the expression still remains....fun and laughter. These pics were taken while setting up my lights and testing out the wireless remote. I was trying to tickle my daughter's neck and she of course hated it...NOT!
Again - thank you for your comments.
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John William
{K:775} 10/23/2006
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Thanks for your comment. The color was just to contrast the B&W.
Best regards.
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Mary Brown
{K:71879} 10/23/2006
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This definately shows the love betwen these two. That makes it a pleasure to view. For me, the coloured one draws my eye there and I find it hard to go back to the others and enjoy the wonderful expressions that are there. The crisp edges are okay as there are mostly contrasts between the edges of the joining pictures. The place this does not work is between the large top left and the large middle pictures. As both have his skin tones right to the edges in the one part, it makes the transition from one to the other less distinct and so not as pleasing. However, overall it is a glorious expression of love and makes me smile.
MAry
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John William
{K:775} 10/22/2006
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Thanks for your comments. I actually turned down the suggested contrast and to me it seemed there was too much light. I guess I was worried it would blow out the skin tones.
Thanks for the imput.
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Gail Solvang
{K:314} 10/22/2006
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How touching! What precious moments! But the contrast could be better. The color photo is too distracting for this collage. And the collage is put together a little too 'choppy'. The sharp overlap of a couple of the pictures onto the next image is kinda sloppy to me, and does not compliment the collage that way. But the tight shot of your faces really emphasizes the "close relationship" between father and daughter, which makes each portrait so fantastic.
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evershine evershine
{K:324} 10/22/2006
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Nice collection.. I think the contrast of the black and white is not enough.
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Maurizio Massetti
{K:30463} 10/22/2006
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Interesting composition, maybe better all in black and white...
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