You killed her. The bottom of this outfit doesn't fit. There is a big pooch in the front near the top, it's too small for her and cuts into the skin causing big skin wrinkles at each side and her right leg position also is causing a large wrinkle in her skin. Good idea, bad execution, and she has great skin to work with it appears. Just don't ask me to shoot it any better, I'm sure I can't. Overall I think your work is very good glamour photography; and it's hard stuff to do well. This one just doesn't live up to the rest.