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matthew kinslow
{K:2525} 6/22/2003
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gorgeous model... I agree with Nandor about the shadow
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Nandor Lang
{K:1257} 6/22/2003
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Well done! The only thing I would change is the shadow on the right side of her face (left on the photo). Keep on! Regards, Nandi
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marcelo pinheiro
{K:39} 6/22/2003
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Very sensual. Beautiful light.
Good background.
Not sure if you used a reflector on her left side.
That could have helped reduce the shawdow on her chest.
It's a gret shot anyway.
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Priyadarshi Sinha
{K:7238} 6/21/2003
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overall a great shot. regards.
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Subha Pindiproli
{K:10108} 6/21/2003
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good lighting.. nice tanned model..
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Andrew Chambers
{K:1271} 6/21/2003
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Very beautiful shot,portrait of a lovely model well done
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David Morris
{K:1404} 6/21/2003
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Very beautiful shot, but there are a couple of that jump out at me right away. 1. pull the wrinkle out of the top of her sleeve near the shoulder. It doesn't look like a "natural" wrinkle. 2. Get the hair off the right side of her face. I don't think the hair style works well with that "look", and it leaves a black hole around her right eye. 3. I would suggest removing the necklace. She has a wonderful skin tone and I think the curve of her neck to the breasts would be best if not broken by the necklace. If you insist on a necklace, a longer chain would look better. 4. Move the jacket off of her left breast a little. I don't say that to see more of her breast for the sake of seeing more breast, but rather to fill out the area a little more.
I hope that I didn't offend, or otherwise upset anyone with my comments. Portrait work is hard and there are a million little things that are easy to overlook. I spent several years as an Air Force photographer doing official portraits, I know how hard they are to do. Even the smallest thing looks much larger in the finished product. I admire you for being able to take photos like this. It is overall a very good shot. I hope that I have helped in some way.
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Gregory McLemore
{K:35129} 6/21/2003
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Jeff, a well capture, portrait of a lovely lady,the background is well suited to this capture, as it compliments the tones and soft clarity, bravo, well done.
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