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Rolf Rock
{K:2964} 9/12/2003
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very good color admission, It is not surely, for me whether another background would have been better, but otherwise a good work
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Torben Thorhauge
{K:122} 9/7/2003
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Thanks for your comments ;-)
And especially thanks to Artie for taking time to give at constructive comment.
best regards
Torben
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Pedro Libório
{K:53861} 9/5/2003
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the red dress and the black Porche ... another title ;-)
great work!
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Hannu Eskelinen
{K:-979} 9/5/2003
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Would be so much better without this Porsche behind... and little bit out of focus too... i would also leave more space under her feet. Still, great pic.
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Artie Colantuono
{K:12275} 9/5/2003
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Torben Thorhauge, this is a classic commercial image...fashion, as you catagorized it, maybe, maybe not... lifestyle definitely, car ad possibly as a lifestyle approach and you handled the lighting very well but your frame is too much. You definitely dont need all the space around it since it is negative space and whats in it doesnt't add to your image's saleability....I took the liberty to cut into your image as an example of bringing the model and prop into the front more....Well executed image and looking forward to more....
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