don't take badly, but to me this is just a snap shot, the background in subjects doesn't relate me to anything, especially not relax, subject dead in the middle, static... I guess u have the great blue sea to the left... include that, with subjects... sea is a typical example to insinuate relaxation (well, depends on the state I guess... sure can also show fury...) keep shooting, is the only way to improve!
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