Hi Jim, thanks for the honest comment on my last shot, greatly appreciated. This shot has huge potential, the tone range can really work here. The positives are the subject herself, intriguing and begs a few questions from the vuewer. As mentioned, the use of dark clothes, dark bg and a light face has worked although the face is a touch too light. On the improvement side, I would certainly have shot this with her head way up the top of the frame, all that space doesn't serve any purpose. Cheers, Darrin