History buffs may find interest in that this was shot at Cooper's Furnace, a location that featured largly during the cival war. The photo reminds me of the movie "The Labyrinth" from the 80's. This was my first portrait shoot. Please offer suggestions if you see anything I could have done better.
This is pretty cool, perhaps the tonality could use a little tweaking (especially the highlights/bright greys; doing this in broad daylight might also yield good results, go ahead and try) and the composition is somewhat central (not necessarily bad, but still it might be interesting to explore several different options with slightly less space on the right), but to me it's the best shot of what you've shown from this shoot. Good idea, mysterious, interesting. Well done, do more like this.