composition is good, but seems too soft, Nicole. i think you need to either have a wrinkled backdrop of a pressed one. the fold lines are distracting. pull your subject away from that background and put more light on it. that should help the model pop right out because of the separation.
This is a very interesting series. All three photographs remind me a lot of the early (1920's, Mary Pickford) Hollywood photography, with its hot light sources and high contrast, coupled with softness introduced by lenses that were in use at that time.
I like these photos a lot, keep it up!
D.
P.S. There was an album published recently of Mary Pickford's stills, you might want to take a look at it.