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Mark Williams
{K:1016} 1/4/2004
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I agree with the arm being behind her back it does look unnatural. And the shutters are distracting too...but you have done a fine job in the composition
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Deleted User
{K:6775} 12/21/2001
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I cant edit my comment any more and upon rereading it, when I said to crop to balance the right with the left...my meaning was to crop to balance the ARCH at the top...not the amount of space on either side of the model....hope that makes sense now ....Maggie *smile*
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Deleted User
{K:6775} 12/21/2001
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Hi Kristupa I like the feel of this image and the toning that is done on it but...I would have liked more separation between her hair and the background.
I also find the positioning of her right arm to be awkward. I think if her arm was a little more forward and her hand more visible on her hip it would make her arm more proportionate and accentuate her hip more.
I would also crop in on the left side to balance with the right and adjust the camera angle so the louvres are level and not on an angel.
Hope you agree on a couple of these points...the image itself is a great one.....just a bit of fine tuning and it would be awesome!!!....*smile* Maggie
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David Meiland
{K:1820} 12/21/2001
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Excellent composition, light, tones in the print. Wondering if you could clone the area under her right elbow and paint the louvers in--the visible part of the frame there interrupts the curve of her body. Great shot.
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Chris Whaley
{K:3847} 12/21/2001
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Very Retro...nice job Kristupa.
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