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Adam E. J. Squier
{K:9803} 6/12/2004
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I'd crop in from the top so her eyes aren't right in the middle of the frame. If I printed an 8x10 of this, I'd crop out as much of the top as possible, even if it meant cutting out part of her head.
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Ray Gould
{K:1539} 1/19/2003
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I love this side frontal shot. Sort of sexy. :) I would've liked to carry that theme as well with like your head tilted back and staring from the side with a sensual facial/feeling (exposing more of her neck and draping her long hair back). Great piece and the background is perfect to compliment. (9
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Antonio Díaz
{K:2710} 1/9/2003
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at first i posted this version, besides the crop, what do you think?
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Lassitude
{K:416} 1/9/2003
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very pleasing background...i think it actually makes this image...
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Jerry Ilo
{K:49} 1/9/2003
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Very nice image, Great expession on your models face. I would have to agree with the everyone and say corp it alot tighter overall very nice though.
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Steve Mekata
{K:610} 1/9/2003
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compared to Adriana II, her pose and/or expression looks a bit more forced. good, tho.
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Antonio Díaz
{K:2710} 1/9/2003
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thank you all, really... for people like is why i love this site, hehe, i?ll take the advice of the film, and thanks for the advice on the crop too, i?ll consider that on next shooting session...
and the most important, i?ll forget about ratings...
thanks!
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Petros Stamatakos
{K:12101} 1/9/2003
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I agree with Artie (how could I not - he is the master). Even though I use the rating system, I don't necessarily take too much notice of it. I'd consider cropping 5% - 10% from the top.
On your choice of film, even though I haven't used this film before, I'm not sure I like the skin tones it re-produces (if one can go by a scanned image that is). Try shooting this in either Kodak Portra 160NC or Fuji 160NPC. If however you wanted to shoot slide, Artie taught me a while ago to trust Fuji ASTIA...
Keep posting!!! :-)
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Artie Colantuono
{K:12275} 1/9/2003
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screw the ratings....crop it tighter, get in closer...good pose, try to keep the lighting interesting although this works for her expression...keep it up and keep posting...you're off to a good start....the other version I saw of her before you deleted it needed a tighter more vertical frame...otherwise, you've got a good visual relationship with the girl....cool!
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Lisa Howeler
{K:3706} 1/9/2003
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Actually I might like yours better because you can see the background and the full view of her better in your photo. But this was an idea....still I think I like your photo much better than this idea (that is my disclaimer)
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Lisa Howeler
{K:3706} 1/9/2003
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Okay, here is my constructive criticism -- I hate this photo! Ha, no seriously. I love the expression on this girls face and I love the background. I like how the background fades out. I think the photo is very captivating. A closer crop in on her face might add a little more to the photo, but I'm not sure. The lighting on her face, might lack some shadowing that might add a little variety, but really I think this is photo is otherwise beyond criticism. I honestly like it and do not see why anyone would rate it low or not comment on it! I have the same problem Antonio, with the comments I mean, so I understand your frusteration.
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Antonio Díaz
{K:2710} 1/9/2003
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thank you Lisa for your support... =)
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Antonio Díaz
{K:2710} 1/9/2003
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thank you Lisa for your support... =)
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