City - Oxford State - MICHIGAN Country - United States
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This photo is kind of a tribute to another photographer here named Pan Giannakis. His work is truly inspiring to me. It may not be that great of a photograph, but I really enjoy it.
Okay, you asked for a critique. I think cropping of this would help it. Maybe leaving in the two posts, focusing on the rust textures on the walls instead of the building itself. In other words, enlarging the view through cropping would focus on the rust stains or bring them into view.
It would also crop out the two electric lines in the sky. You also seem to have some silhouetting around the edges of the photos. Not sure if this was intentional or due to filter obstrcution on your lens. If it is intentioanl, never mind. If not, watch for it when you shoot.
A bit of tweaking the contrast/color/brightness may also be in order in addition to the cropping.
I have put it in my favourites to keep it. Thank you so much, i really love the abstract feeling to it and the soft tones, it's wonderfull. Thank you soooooo much. Pan.
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