This is David Cunningham's info address. He was able to give me a lot of good advice on these shots, but since I don't have a camera that can take multiple exposures I filed the info somewhere and don't know where it is! *grin*
Oh, yeah Kim, that's cool. Something I'll definitely try, thanks. Does changing the ISO to 3200 do the same as underexposing 5 stops? That's how I did a 32-exposure before, but it seems easier maybe to change the ISO - got to remember to change it back, though!
To me it looks like either not enough movement or too much... it's just sitting at an awkward point. Have you ever seen David Cunningham's work, in which he takes 40+ pictures on the same frame? I'll upload one at the bottom. He sets the ISO to a way higher speed, and then fires away on the same frame, making an impressionistic picture. Might be something to try. With your Sensia, rated at 100, you would set the ISo to 3200 and could take 32 shots on the same frame (or so I think this is how it goes.)
I like the colour of your leaves, and the fact that the branches seem to stay in the same place while the leaves have got the motion. Definitely worth another try!