Don't take this too much to heart - the hat is just a tad too low to the eyes, Iwould like to have seen his eyes just a bit more, the eyes lead directly to the heart, the spirit, etc. The background - keep it uncluttered - the Sea, the ship, leads my eyes away from your subject, your horizin is NOT straight - keep this in mind, other wise, you've got another great prortrait here just like the female and the two shots of the children. Keep up the great work - and remember - keep my eyes on your subject - not on what's around him/her! :} and where's the aperture and shutter information I keep asking about?? Keep smiling, Ms Pater, Good work!
Don't take this too much to heart - the hat is just a tad too low to the eyes, Iwould like to have seen his eyes just a bit more, the eyes lead directly to the heart, the spirit, etc. The background - keep it uncluttered - the Sea, the ship, leads my eyes away from your subject, your horizin is NOT straight - keep this in mind, other wise, you've got another great prortrait here just like the female and the two shots of the children. Keep up the great work - and remember - keep my eyes on your subject - not on what's around him/her! :} Keep smiling!
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