I don't agree with Sandra, I think it was not meant to be 'spooky', but merely romantic. I like the soft glow of the candles shining of at her face and reflecting on the surface of the table.
But I do think it needs cropping a bit all around, see my example. The lower part is too long and distract one's eye from the face.
The main object is the face, shined upon by candle light and that you've captured well in my opinion.
I am not going to give this a rating. But I will say that from viewing your other pictures posted you have some good images. so looking at this image I am thinking that you can do better and this could use refining. The subject is not flatterd by this lighting and it doesnt quite give a fully spooky look either. I dont like that they are so obviously tea lights. I do like the texture apperance of the table the candels are on a lot! I understand the idea I just would encourage you to work on this a bit more. Fine tune the lighting. I have found it helps to add a soft, diffused spot light on the models face, when using candle light. One more thing I am curious as to what is behind the subject?
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