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Dina Marie
{K:-1410} 5/9/2004
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i am thinking this shot is perfect. Perfect for the mood & the purpose of the series. Do you have more to this series?
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Maurizio Massetti
{K:30463} 4/24/2003
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Wonderful portrait. Regards. MM.
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Renee Robinson
{K:2112} 4/23/2003
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This is it in color, but I'm not sure it makes the background anymore interesting.
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Daniel Lozano
{K:1162} 4/23/2003
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Nice expression, good use of DOF, but the background is uninteresting and there is a lot of it in your photo. :)
the emotional appeal is excellent.
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José Varela
{K:636} 4/23/2003
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Excellent pottrait !
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Renee Robinson
{K:2112} 4/23/2003
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Onur:
Thank you -- interesting observation there. It wasn't something I conciously thought of -- about the horizon that is. NOw that you point it out I can see your point. Thank you so much for the advice.
Ronny:
Thank you as well :-)
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Onur Aydin
{K:9815} 4/23/2003
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Hello Renee;
I believe you have taken a great quality shot, but the composition could become much better.
When you centralized the land to the picture, our focus brings us to the horizon as well. It is very brave to try to put %70 of the picture in blur, but while the main subject is not a small thing ...
I would had this one, on a different angle first at all. If I'm forced to this angle, then I would include as much as her hair is included in the composition, as much as %20 to down (I wouldn't worry that the land is not centralized, the main subject is the old lady).
This is all I can recommend according to the composition, except that as I said I believe it's great quality shot.
Kind regards; Onur Aydin.
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Ronny Van Eeckhoutte
{K:12734} 4/23/2003
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Brilliant portrait.Good B&W.
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