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Carol Cefalu
{K:8388} 3/19/2010
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I definately think the colors are distracting from the emotion on the young girls faces. I prefer the bw version :P
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/24/2008
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Thanks Alain. I had intentionally kept *some* parts in dark.. like shades in human characters, I like (dark) shades in pitcures too :):)
cheers, Avi
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Alain Mijngheer
{K:11733} 11/24/2008
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Hello Avi,
nice one and made me smile. A bit dark perhaps but that could be due to my own screen.
Be well,
Alain
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Dubravko Grakalic
{K:25235} 11/22/2008
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everythinh is here - street irony, urban story, life and people..great work!
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pan g.
{K:16899} 11/15/2008
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Excellent work my friend!
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H L
{K:11377} 11/13/2008
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Avi, always when I do street shots had to be the right energy :) I guess everyone has a different motive but essentially all come down to a final presentation witch seems nothing more than what it is!!!!!I believe my latest streets shots also might have offend you too!!!
Harry
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/10/2008
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Thank you. You are a very accomplished photographer yourself.
peace,
Avi
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Marcio Janousek
{K:32538} 11/10/2008
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What brilliant colors and what an discouraged faces.
The crop on the man is very good too...
Good composition,hugs.
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/9/2008
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easily the most uplifting and hilarious comment I received for some time now ! thanks !! :):):)
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/9/2008
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Yes, this works very well ! :)
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{K:44058} 11/8/2008
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Interesting capture Avi, their pose and expression says it all.. I had a smile reading your about, does that mean txules gets the man at the corner of the frame..
regards..
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 11/8/2008
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Ok Avi, looks good.
It is difficult to cut something out of a shot that you are happy with.
I also like a 5x7 crop with the width of the grey door frame on the left included, as it left more room on the left and bottom (and of course including the man).
However, I think I became attached to the original frame size/crop.
So I did some dodging and burning. You have probably already considered that, but if not it's something you might play with. I'll post an example.
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/7/2008
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Hiya Jinggoy !
Thanks for your comment, my friend. See my cropped version that I attached to the reply to Kes. Somehow I don't like it so much after doing that though.. see for yourself.
cheers and have a great weekend !
Avi
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Jinggoy Montenejo
{K:7736} 11/7/2008
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Wow, you're certainly becoming a master in street photography.
I like how you captured the three subjects here. The two bored women and the guy on the right. My eye likes to move to the right to include more of the guy and less of the door to the left. I like the deep red paint.
Definitely very good timing!!!
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/7/2008
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Thanks Kes. I did all that on the left and bottom (see attached) but somehow the result doesn't look as good to me as I thought it would.. because it kind of reduces the gritty street feel somewhat. see for yourself.
about the guy on the right though, I am not letting him go at any cost - he is the pillar of my composition.. I aimed at voyeur.. that was the whole point of this !
cheers !!
Avi
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 11/7/2008
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Hi Avi! Great piece! Superb color, love the composition....
- discussion points - :)
agree with a bit of a crop on the left, to the grey door frame, getting rid of the shiny door handle, then tone down the confusing reflections and lights in the upper left area. This might give a bit more emphasis to the man on the right...which some might say to crop out but I like him there.
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Rocco T
{K:4130} 11/6/2008
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Vert well seen, good colors and details.
Regards
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/6/2008
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thanks Harry.. I am trying.. as you know..
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/6/2008
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I was unsure of the steel doorframe.. so a crop at left and bottom is probably good. I agree.
I don't agree with the tight and darkness on the right though - for me, that was what made the compo.
thanks very much for the analysis !
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H L
{K:11377} 11/6/2008
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Avi, In my oppinion I see it as starting point for better!!
Harry
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txules .
{K:62768} 11/6/2008
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well, I'd crop a bit at the bottom and at the left (hand view); probably it's a bit tight and dark on the right as well, perhaps some rework can improve it but overall is great....jd
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/6/2008
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thanks. any points to discuss ?
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txules .
{K:62768} 11/6/2008
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this is brilliant, very refreshing a piece of modern art photography, love it
jd
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Pablo Dylan
{K:63918} 11/6/2008
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Great street for me.
Very...very nice.
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/6/2008
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any suggestions or any points to discuss ?
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Captain Demu Potleg
{K:1594} 11/6/2008
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Excellent hoyeche, besh bhalo..
and i am honored boss, thanks :)
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Pietro Clarizia
{K:8241} 11/5/2008
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excellent Street !! great Capture !
ciao !
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/5/2008
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Muchas gracias mi amigo!
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Didem Bilgic
{K:581} 11/5/2008
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Me parece una genialidad captar este momento. Enhorabuena
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Satrajit Biswas
{K:216} 11/5/2008
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good one ..
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sarbik basu
{K:459} 11/5/2008
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besh shundor.... model release ache to?:) like the story..
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/4/2008
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Yes, I felt this one Needs the color :)
thanks & cheers !
Avi
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Swapna Chatterjee
{K:695} 11/4/2008
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Too good Avi Da. Hats off.
Regards.
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Billy Bloggs
{K:51043} 11/4/2008
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Looks like you've been hanging around some dodgy street corners Avi, but hey, I do understand that we sometimes have to suffer for our art..Fantastic street image, glad you left it in colour
Regards, gary
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/4/2008
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but that is the WHOLE point ! aro prominent hole oi uncertainty byapartai to chole jeto. subtlety na thakle ar voyeurism ki holo ?
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soumya
{K:13087} 11/4/2008
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ektai point. dan dik theke uki mara lok ta aar ektu prominent hole darun hoto. but ok. i liked this shot.
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/4/2008
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good call on the blue tinge.. in fact, aro blue chhilo (maybe WB setting was wrong) jeta ami ekta 15% warm filter lagiye correct korar chesta korechhi, kintu tao ektu beshi-y bluish roye gechhe.
tobe story daralo na tor kachhe etai main .. dekhi Ronny ar txules ki bole (jodi dekhe)
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Anindya Chakraborty
{K:12765} 11/4/2008
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darun chobi....
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/4/2008
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Hi Luca, what appealed to me here was a scene with a titillating ad caption and a hint of voyeurism. :)
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D e b
{K:9399} 11/4/2008
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technically outstanding color management ... though a bit of blue tinge... but that went well with the mood. Use of wide is perfect out here.
But the story is little cliche in my mind...!!! assha kori kichu mone korbe na...:)
Onekdin pore keu dedicate korlo :)...thank you ..!!!
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/4/2008
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thanks Nigel.. your appreciation is an honour for me.
cheers,
Avi
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Nigel Watts.
{K:5171} 11/4/2008
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Great street photograph, very original
Nigel
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/4/2008
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I am glad that you caught the humor ! :)
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Avi
{K:70138} 11/4/2008
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ota amar Scorsese-De Niro combination-er one of the best three movies. Other two are Raging Bull and King of Comedy :)
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Saad Salem
{K:89003} 11/4/2008
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beautiful photo,for a fine catch,
a fine dedication,regards to all,
Saad.
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Malules Fernandez
{K:54810} 11/4/2008
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This is a very good street photo, dear Avi.
Sadness on their faces, as it can not be otherwise.
LEAVE NOTHING, complete the message.
Perfectly composed in its entirety ... the glass vacuum, the man who looks ...
Excellent, my friend.
hug,
Malules
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Nilanjan Mitra
{K:12955} 11/4/2008
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good good... bhalo hoyeche :)
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Wolf Zorrito
{K:78768} 11/4/2008
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Two hotties to have a nice laugh with ...... or not.
I like the way how their feet are positioned differently.
I prefer the left one ;-)
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Indranil Ray
{K:2035} 11/4/2008
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Darun hoiche streetshot hishabe. Story ta nia jome gache. Colour ta o fatafati.
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Luca Peccerillo
{K:17660} 11/4/2008
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I'm not sure of to have understood the meaning but is really a very spontaneous release and unusual.
Be well.
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Syamantak Das
{K:3997} 11/4/2008
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ajkaal thread-er title dekhlei ajdaaz kora jay ke tulechhey ....
ami jante chaiona tumi ki bhebe tulechho...ami amar moto bhebe nilaam ebong aamr kintu bedom hashi pachche... 
e chhara color handling-ta shekhar moto ei chhobita theke
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Rajesh Bhattacharjee
{K:3647} 11/4/2008
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amaro ei street shot ta bhalo laglo :):)
reminds me of taxi driver
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Sudip Roy
{K:1001} 11/4/2008
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Byapok story telling amar darun laglo!
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