Was trying to capture that high contrast image you see on the beach, left the bright spot on the upper left to pull the eye away from the face a bit. Love the effect on the eye colour in this light.
You know, I am not an expert of portraits, I am still learning, but I think that this is good. Even if in backlit, the face of the girl it is well lighted, without antiaesthetics shades, maybe the image is a little veiled and the hair loses the details where the light is stronger, but it is a well done portrait. Bye Max