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Jon Slater
{K:1340} 12/30/2003
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Very good shot. My only point for improvement would be to use PS to correct the perspective angle on the left of the photo. What are the writings saying? I don't care about anyone else's property, I've got a can of spray paint.
Jon
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SarahM none
{K:7836} 12/15/2003
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Hi Mike, you certainly have a very creative eye! I really like this and you have captured a lot of detail, even though we don't know what that detail means. I would also be curious about what this would have looked like in color? Were the writings in all sorts of colors? (Not to imply that you shouldn't have used B&W, as I really like it as it is.) Also, you might consider cropping off just a tad on the right so the image ends with the wall? Super shot and most creative!!!!
Thank you so much for your comment on my image "snow." Shockingly, I did use a tripod and a Nikkor VR lens with a cable release. I think I should have used a higher Aperature. The weather was appalling, so I just took a couple of shots and ran back to the warm car. Need to learn to suffer more for my art :)
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Dan Arthur
{K:4280} 12/15/2003
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Hey Mike, Thanks for the kind words and the detailed comments! I can't tell you how much it's appreciated. As someone trying hard to move into a professional arena, the need for comment and feedback is critical - so thanks much!
With regard to this photo, I will say that you never cease to amaze me with your creative eye. I'm an engineer by education and I tend to look at things very mechanically (I still like the coffe cup photo, but haven't been able to re-create it). You have shown with this and your other photos a degree of creativity and originality that always surprises me (where do you come up with these ideas?).
Anyway, I really do like this photo, but really think that it could have been made better had there been something else in the photo to enhance the composition (perhaps a person or animal?). I'm also curious as to why you didn't use a tripod? Seems that the photo could have been even that much better? Keep up the work and let me know how you did the coffe cup shot! Best Regards, Dan
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Gregory Fiedler
{K:15439} 12/13/2003
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The person is trying to say. I have a piant can stuck to my hand and I can't get it off! Help!!! Well really I don't understand it either, but it is a good photo! Great perspective and depth!
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Spencer E.
{K:4032} 12/7/2003
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interesting capture blue... I'd love to see the portrait shot.. convince her! (Or maybe switch her face out in photoshop? haha!)
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Michael Alexander
{K:5293} 12/7/2003
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Great idea dan, I've did one, but she dosent want to be posted on the internet etc.. have to trade her in for one that will LOL
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Dan Lightner
{K:12684} 12/7/2003
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Mike this is a great location .You need to take some portraits here in the arches its got a lot of potential, you might ned some relectors or some light to brighten it up , but I can see a lot ways to use this location..May be a girl in blue jeans and a white shirt,or maybe yellow.
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Michael Alexander
{K:5293} 12/6/2003
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Good point Andreas
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Andreas Wolkerstorfer
{K:5090} 12/6/2003
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hm, I guess the writings are not to understand, they are just statements that there was someone - like paintings in carves or so
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Cherie Spike
{K:-21959} 12/6/2003
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great shot Blue! Well seen
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