Lovely portrait, Suhaila. Beautiful colours and tones. Great composition and a wonderful expression on her face. Nice light in her eyes and good eye contact. I just feel it could be a bit sharper.
Thanks Adam for your coments, acctually i use digital camera Canon D30, the shoot was complet i took her fingers but as you know Digital ....i must hv attention, this girla was wearing new cloth during the celvration of Ramadan holliday, she were happy to hv the picture and shy cz she was eating fries ships....
This is absoulutely beautiful. Her expression is perfect. Really brings to mind the playfulness of girls this age. The light, aperture, almost everything is perfect. The fatal flaw is that her fingertips are cut off. Also, a tiny bit of fill flash would have added some pop.
You don't say whether this was shot on film or digital (I'm guessing film). You might want to examine the negative and see if the tips of her fingers are in there and have it reprinted. If it's a decision between cropping the top of the pony tail or her fingers, crop the hair.
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