Hi Lachlan, Great hat!! I really like how she is looking thru the hat! Nice colors also! Not sure about the composition on this one, I see you want all of the hat inside the frame, but it leaves too much space above. (Is this the original crop?? just curious) I think I would have placed her differently. And I think if the background were toned down, she would stand out more. Just my opinion, hope you don't mind... :)