I think this image REALLY shows what this girl is like. MY problem with it is that there's no hairlight/kicker to separate her from the background, and her hair had fallen forward - raccooning again...but the darkness is also how I printed it. Her expression and face aren't the focal points of this image anyway. I think it's really exemplary of her attitude and personality in that she's not ashamed easily, but she certainly doesn't put forth a "slutty" image. Tell me what you think.. more about how I've conveyed that idea - concealing one thing and revealing something much more interesting.
agree with detlef about the provocative personality.I personally do not have any trouble with the eyes to me it justs adds to the mystery of the young lady in my humble opinion as for the background maybe a different color would make her stand out some more.. her blouse and the background are blending which is the problem there
I guess I didn't manage to get it across that I was emphasizing that pretty big scar on her stomach.. but I suppose it's a little hard to see. My point was that I'm hiding what's normally shown in pictures like this, and revealing something that most photographic models wouldn't show..
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