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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 6/13/2006
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stunning. marvelous background. lovely pic. great.
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WAEL HAMDAN
{K:7476} 11/28/2005
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Super Asim i like it
well done
regard
wael
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Mohamed Banna
{K:34237} 7/19/2005
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well done
congrats 7/7 sure
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Stephen Bivens
{K:7308} 2/11/2005
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Very nice.
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Enjoy
{K:16125} 6/21/2004
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Asim I can not believe I missed this...I love it!!!!
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Neil Dolman
{K:26883} 4/25/2004
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Hi Asim, first of all, before i forget, many thanks for your kind comments! Secondly, i can see from the number of ratings that this has been on the front page, probably as featured critic and has recieved lots of views but hardly any ratings - shame! Basically i agree with Elangovan but what "upsets" me more are the intersectings lines from the different hills, all crossing behind her head! Just a slight change of angle would have helped here. A little fill in flash and this would be great. I know this is difficult as your daughter might not want to sit still that long and you have lots of things to think of exposure etc. But keep 'em coming. Practice makes perfect. My very best wishes to you from Switzerland, Neil
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Subhash Sen
{K:11931} 4/4/2004
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Keep up the good work Asim,cheers,Subhash.
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Elangovan S
{K:10675} 4/3/2004
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Asim...
I just quickly looked at your portfolio. This is your daughter, right? You might have emotional attachment to this picture. However, as a viewer of this image this is what I feel, and is purly my personal opinion.
Couple of things to note -
- This is much like a bull'e eye composition. The subject's face (eyes) is at the very much center of the picture. Hmmm... This location where you shoot is the right opportunity to keep the subject in a one of the thirds. In this case, I would have setup the subject where the left and center 3rds are intersecting - if I wanted to shoot w/o fill flash, because the light is coming from the right side of the frame. Even though she is in the open shade still the light is directional. For an alternate composition, the subject could be positioned at the intersection of right and center 3rd and use fill flash to kick it up a bit.
- secondly, there is nice bit of room in the picture, I wouldnt have cropped her like that. But thats just individuals choice. But as a thumb rule, dont crop at the joints (such as knee, ankles and such) of the subject.
The film that you used an awesome film. I just love 'em.
Keep shooting. Have fun.
Elangs.
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Stephen Bowden
{K:64141} 4/3/2004
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Super Asim, lovely photo
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Teunis Haveman
{K:53426} 4/3/2004
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Yes I see you
Beautiful
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