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Diego Bullita
{K:17017} 7/3/2006
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grazie josep per il tuo bel commento
saludos
diego
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josep alsina
{K:19880} 7/2/2006
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Interesante composición, con unos colores preciosos. Saludos de
Josep
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Diego Bullita
{K:17017} 4/20/2004
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hi Marco,
č stato uno scatto del tutto casuale (come mostra pure la mancanza della punta del colore viola), ma mi ha incuriosito comunque...
grazie Diego
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Diego Bullita
{K:17017} 4/20/2004
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hi jim
the photo has been much accidental one, has thousand imperfections, but it has to me made curious however; thanks for your comment
(it pardons my English)
diego
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Stephen Bowden
{K:64141} 4/20/2004
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Excellent composition, wonderful colours Diego
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Jim Fuglestad
{K:1564} 4/20/2004
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Hi Diego,
I see what you're trying to do here. A few thoughts...
1. I'm not sure what I'm supposed to look at. The DOF seems to be lead me to the pencils at the back left, but I'm not sure why. I'm wondering if you're not too close for the Sony macro to work?
2. Do something a bit more intriguing with the composition - it's a little right up the middle. I wonder if a straight down angle would be more captivating?
3. I find the shadows a bit distracting. They're a bit all over the place.
This is a great subject to revisit and rework. The great thing about pencils is they'll continue to cooperate! ;-)
Keep at it!
Jim
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Marco Cusumano
{K:455} 4/20/2004
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Non riesco a trovare un punto stabile di messa a fuoco.
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