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Stan Pustylnik
{K:6768} 5/5/2004
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Personally I like what you got. Maybe it's not what you wanted. But very natural. I like your more then suggested ones. Bright cloths actually removed shades from his face. Which is awesome natural effect. Sticks at right are natural. Nothing whong with them in image.
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John Hatziemmanouil
{K:40580} 4/24/2004
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This is a good portrait Amna. Here the problem for the camera is that the SO bright clothes that shining a lot of lighting makes the exposure less and so the face looks little dark but this is something that IS NOT BAD! Not at all. The shadows at the back is not something bad too. Just the flash. I don't remember the numbers of the flsh sychronice of 300D.
I good idea for these photos with a so bright part like his clothes is to have a Cokin filter like the grey NOT at your lens BUT hold it frond to the flash! Not orange or generaly coloured filter because the flash will add this color to his clothes or generaly to the photo. The last one is you can do is not to use th flash. Try with natural lighting. Now about these brunches (also not something bad) except the different cropping, closer to his face, you can also use PS or other program. The tool is the CLONE that you can remove these easily because of the white background of the objects that you want to remove. Last one little bit sharpness BUT VERY LITTLE! Not strong because the dark areas could have some noise if the sharpness added.
All these could make the photo better however I don't agree with the title. Small details I think. The photo is very good and even with a strong critique it takes 6!
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Kristina Kohut
{K:49990} 4/24/2004
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Very interesting man and expression! I think the quality is good enough to find good!
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NN
{K:26787} 4/23/2004
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An interesting character; thanks for sharing. Personally I like Anna?s suggestion ...
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Antonella Nistri
{K:21867} 4/23/2004
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Yes,it sure can be improved ( the sharpness for example ) but the subject is soooooooooooooooo GREAT !!!!! I love it,Amna,keep posting them!!! Antonella
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augusto mario cunha
{K:19049} 4/23/2004
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I will try to do something and e-mail the image directly to you. Perhaps under enlargement I can find the stick you deplore. For the time being, I like the capture very much!
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Rob Ernsting
{K:8899} 4/22/2004
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What I would attempt to do is following. In PS enlarge over maximum size, take the eye dropper and go part by small part even 3 or 4 pixels large maximum test the color and correct with pixel size 2 or max 3 and so. It is elaborate but the only way I know. Regards, Rob.
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jon parsons
{K:13639} 4/22/2004
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Dear Amna, I think its a wonderful shot! we dont always have to make these things perfect to be very very good! wonderful work....jon
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Elena Zabelina
{K:23212} 4/22/2004
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Hi Amna, your portrait is great. I like what Anna did - her crop works very good, I think (just little bit to dark still). Biliana's variant, for me, better with white, but sharpness not enough. I think, you can do something betwen them. Still, your shot is beautiful.
Regards,
lena
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Orazio Minnella
{K:49417} 4/22/2004
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Nice work!!Great capture!!Beautiful tones,lights and composition.Congrats.
Regards
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Enjoy
{K:16125} 4/22/2004
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I wish I knew but I think its lovely!!!!
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B:)liana
{K:30945} 4/22/2004
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Great portrait dear Amna, but dark at the left part, I think you can improve the photograph in Black and white and would be more effective even in B&W. otherwise, great portrait ;-)
Kiss, Biliana
Here is something that I manage to do but still...
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Anna Pagnacco
{K:7448} 4/22/2004
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This is my contribute:-)
A crop.... unsharp mask to sharpen a bit...took away the white spot on the lips and soften the whites...Nonetheless a beautiful portrait....
Ciao Anna
It would be great on N/W too
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Saeed Al Shamsi
{K:47735} 4/22/2004
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I like it as it is, and the sharpness concentrated on the face is just perfect, beautiful expression, and lovely composition,(I had an agreement with him if Amna came to shot ,do not agree),lol,7/7Saeed
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Riny Koopman
{K:19998} 4/22/2004
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amna great portait and very good composition
good job,
best regards riny
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