What a fine image, Richard. I like that close view, it feels more 'connected' than the traditional long lens from a distance. Excellent close cropping. I might have cropped some more off the bottom, to neutralize some of the wide-angle emphasis on her closer hand. This one has great lighting, in contrast with some of your other night images, that are a little grainy.
Great shot with nice close composition and beautiful expression. I think you were very close to the subjects heer and there is a little too much perspective on the girls face, sort of distorting it slightly. Still great eyes and nice to frame.