thank you for the comments! the girl is very photogenic, which made it easy for shooting. i love her eyes too.. when you say focus on the eyes do you mean i should crop the picture? or maybe that the focus is a little off?
I see very simple and nice portrait. The pose, the composition for me are very beautiful, natural - very natural. Love how she's concentrated to look at something (by the way, she has beautifull eyes!!)
Very nice the framing with the tree on the left side, and it's interesting how much good works leafes as background. The one thing I'ld try to improve is to have the focus on her eyes. Regards