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alexander garcia castro
{K:7335} 10/22/2005
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la composision es muy buena, guardas bien las proporcines en la foto. sin embargo creo que los contrastes no son muy buenos. los blancos son demasiado fuertes y no dejan ver detalles en el piso, la pierna, y parte de su pantalon. Has intentado deprotno cuadrar las curvas de color en photohop en la imagenen original (en color) y luego desaturar poco a poco hasta donde se pueda? quisas valdria la pena hacer mas trabajo en PS y ver como se ve la foto en sepia por ejemplo con algo de granualdo, o en color... La foto es buena, es una magnifica composicion.
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Sam Andre
{K:12484} 4/12/2005
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nice characteristic portrait, although it seems a bit over-exposed
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Khaled Mursi Hammoud
{K:54005} 11/17/2004
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Wonderful shot Miguel, This old man looks familier to me ! I like the way you composed the photo with the man sitting on it's right side and the lighting is good too. I can't imagine that this old man is still have the will to smoke cigarettes ! Isn't enought all the pollution that the world is faced with ! It's really a bad habit. Good work Miguel, very expressive, regards, Khaled.
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Miguel Torres
{K:3998} 11/17/2004
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Thanks Hugo for all the comments!!!, i am really learning with all the comments here in Usefilm, i use to have another site, but they doesnt comment as much as here, thanks a lort Hugo
Regards,
Miguel Torres
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185110} 11/16/2004
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Hi Miguel, very caractural image and expression. Well composed, and a very good candid street shot. I do find the contrast between the blown out foreground and the rather dark background a bit too strong, as it removes a bit of the attention from the actual subject. On the other hand, it shows the scorchingly hot and bright sunlight, wich even works in B&W. I do wonder why you converted this one to B&W, as the coloured version might be even nicer. Especially if the tones woud emphasise the atmosphere and the bright day light and warmth. Either way, a very nice job, though.
Cheers,
Hugo
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Marusnik Bela
{K:11611} 11/16/2004
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Congrats! Excellen B&W portrait, very impressive.
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First Last
{K:6897} 11/16/2004
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Excellent shot! Very well composed. I like it.
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Akira Yamaguchi
{K:1163} 11/16/2004
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Good composition.
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Blaine MacDonald
{K:610} 11/16/2004
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great capture
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