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Lester Tradelbloom
{K:3291} 12/10/2004
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Hey Fo, I couldn't resist this; I am off uni for three months now, and I have a lot of time on my hands, so when I got your email, i had to play around with it a little. I haven't done a lot (it is your image, and I don't think it is really my place) but I wanted to give you some idea of what I meant.
So, here it is, I have darkened the girl dramatically and cropped in a little tighter to perfect the composition. I have also added a thin, black boarder to keep the high key image contained a bit better. Hope you like it.
Although, now I don't think 'Crazy girl' really fits this anymore, I thing a title like 'Mystique' or 'Lady of Allure' is better suited.
- Justin
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Lester Tradelbloom
{K:3291} 12/10/2004
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Hey Fo, I couldn't resist this; I am off uni for three months now, and I have a lot of time on my hands, so when I got your email, i had to play around with it a little. I haven't done a lot (it is your image, and I don't think it is really my place) but I wanted to give you some idea of what I meant.
So, here it is, I have darkened the girl dramatically and cropped in a little tighter to perfect the composition. I have also added a thin, black boarder to keep the high key image contained a bit better. Hope you like it.
- Justin
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Fo Xrafios
{K:197} 12/10/2004
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Thanks very much Justin.You have right about the light..I haven't much time to "play" with the photo (this time)...Maybe later...
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Fo Xrafios
{K:197} 12/10/2004
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Thanks for your comment Anne...
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Fo Xrafios
{K:197} 12/10/2004
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Yoy have right, I haven't much time to "change" the photo(in the dark room).I have to learn photoshop...Maybe later...Thans for your comment.It' important for me...
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Fo Xrafios
{K:197} 12/10/2004
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Thanks Marcus..
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Fo Xrafios
{K:197} 12/10/2004
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thanks Igor!
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panos adams
{K:170} 12/8/2004
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Telika ekeivo to meros ntav n oasn tou fwtografou!!! Avte kalo kalokairi, aaaxxx!!! Nice picture
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Igor Gatnik
{K:2300} 12/8/2004
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Great shot. I like the difference between beauty of architecture and reality of real life.
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Lester Tradelbloom
{K:3291} 12/8/2004
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I just wrote a critique for a member who took the idea of compositional principles and threw them out the window to create a beautiful image; you have done the opposite, and I don't think it even crossed your mind.
This really is a wonderful image, and you have composed it with style, not only this, but you have taken a very simple image and brought it to life by adding your 'crazy girl'. A great image which is immortalised in a colourless wonderland.
Just one thing - the lighting on the girl - either silhouette her, or light her correctly - there is too much detail missing in her clothes, etc to gain yourself a 7. Wonderful idea, I commend you.
- Justin
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RC. Dany
{K:64104} 12/8/2004
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7 Excellent
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Gökhan KARAMAN
{K:8878} 12/8/2004
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nice shot and good composition but light ?
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Marcus Armani
{K:36599} 12/8/2004
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very nice detail and perspective, the girl really brings life to the shot, very well done....
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