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Arthur Kornienko
{K:9686} 7/29/2005
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I think you need to revisit the lighting on this shot. It seems flat. The pose is somewhat odd too. Also, I don't know why you would use an 18mm for a body portrait. Sorry if I should too critical, I don't mean to be, just stating my observations. Keep up the good work.
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Rona K **
{K:2375} 1/10/2005
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Very pretty Dawn. Wow! Great Self-portrait. Love your portfolio. Very good eye.
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orwa juve
{K:6059} 1/8/2005
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cool :)
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Patrick Barbary
{K:572} 1/8/2005
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The blue bra line should not be visible. Otherwise, great shot.
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Mohammad Reza Shahrokhi Nejad
{K:7396} 1/8/2005
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good job.
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sezai
{K:410} 1/8/2005
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good work...well done
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Ferdinand
{K:3516} 1/8/2005
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Dawn, that's really very beautiful, and the pose is well thought out. Well done.
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Judi Liosatos
{K:34047} 1/8/2005
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Very beautiful. Well done, Dawn.
Judi
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