Sometimes all the 'wrong things' work out so very well. The decomposited form, focus upon the eyeglasses, the harsh light are all perfectly intentional and fit this subject. Striking. I would like to see it in series.
Some wild eyes you shot there. I like the exposure and textures on the face, but with the composition I feel it is a little right dominant. I like the idea of the unbalanced portrait, much more than the centered, but in this case I think the left side is a little too much.