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Shelly N Alexander
{K:1451} 3/30/2005
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I have to agree with you on the leg. It is a shame to crop it out. Maybe moving that one meter and placing something under her foot so that the leg doesn't look so painful. The wider field will be kept and the image will be a lot more interesting than my tight crop.
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David Hofmann
{K:22223} 3/30/2005
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Hi Shelly,
I agree with most of what you wrote. I actually said the same things in my comment. Especially the fact that moving the camera 1 meter to the right would have eliminated the distracting stuff behind the window.
I hate loosing the knee with a tighter crop. The wider field of view makes it so much more interesting and seeing her pose really adds to the overall image. I don't mind the little deformation of her leg at all.
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Shelly N Alexander
{K:1451} 3/29/2005
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I like this image a lot but there are a few thing that need to be changed because of some issues. Better cropping will correct a lot and I have included an example. The hand on the neck is making the neck look bigger than it really is because of the shadow that it is creating. The background cludder is drwing the eye away from the subject of the image. Correct by moving the photographer to the right, keeping the light and get more of the tree. The arm of the chair is making the leg look weird. I would crop that out or place a box or somthing under the foot of the model.
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Jimmy photoboy
{K:-226} 3/29/2005
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excellent portrait
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David Hofmann
{K:22223} 3/29/2005
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sehr schoenes Modell und das Licht durchs Fenster is wunderschoen. Auch von links kommt ein angenehmes warmes Licht. Ihre Haltung wirk ein klein wenig gestellt, aber das ist absolut ok. Posieren gehoert zum fotografieren. Das einzige was mich etwas stoert ist der Wasseranschluss und das Gitter draussen.
Wie auch immer, sehr schoenes Portrait!
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Patrick Ziegler
{K:21797} 3/29/2005
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Gorgeous Girl!
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