Actually I added the vignetting in a "what the hell do I do, now?" move early this morning. Early - that was probably my first mistake. I took this shot while driving past it though the rear-side window. I think I may take out the vignetting and make another version - a B&W version.
Good composition. Nice saturated colours. I would probably clone out the dark corners (thick polarising filter/ filter stacking?), and sharpen, then i think you've got a winner. Did you manage to take some closer shots of the old building too?
Thanks, Mirza. You porfolio is excellent. I've only just had the chance to glance at your most recent shots, I will take a look at it in more depth soon.