This image impressed me as a nice attempt towards something that could have turned out very impressive.In a thumbnail size it's quite interesting but when i blow it up to the original size i am not very satisfied with what i see.
Colors have been very vibrant but something is lacking from the point of choice of subject, the composition you have chosen and your intent. I can't clearly tell what could have been done to improve this shot,except for some lacunaes that i can observe. You have somehow diminished the importance of your subject by cropping him on the lesser side and guided the viewer to the landscapic view, which except for blue(exciting colors) waters(and immersed rock) lacks much in detail. On the further side of the frame, it's covered up with hills with very dull looking vegetation which is not in coherence with the overall feel of colorful vibrancy that you were trying at. May be you should have included a larger portion of the woman and then you could have suceeded in telling the story from her point of view.
I hope you like my straightforward way of commenting and don't take offence at somethings which might appear little high handed.
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{K:102014} 8/29/2005