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Timothy Schirmer
{K:7201} 11/12/2005
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Thankyou for your comment Emily, I have to admit that I saw this photo a few weeks ago and it caught my attention. Such a beautiful composition and pose. -Tim
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Rodotheos Dovilus
{K:1582} 10/26/2005
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Emily, this is a great work and I'm sure that you can show us more of your promissing talent. Well done.
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Kareem Afifi
{K:5968} 10/24/2005
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cool
shot and model is great
very well done freind
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Endre Novak
{K:12666} 10/23/2005
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agree with Mirek, fully.
Endre
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Mirek Towski
{K:14880} 10/23/2005
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It is a very hard decision what really gets the attention, the girl or the picture of her. After a long thought I will side with the photo, at least for the purpose of this critique. After all it is You, the photographer who made her look so gorgeous. Congratulations! Your portrait is very sensual, I like the fact that You choose to shoot her topless. She appears very relaxed this way and it gives very intimate mood to Your photograph. The few strings of her hair in front of her face do a great job to amplify her good looks. I like the way You placed Your subject too, her face is on the left and the right side is empty for the eye to wander around. What I would question is the use of the fill-in flash or the light that is too close to Your camera and directly in her face. I would credit it with two undesireable effects. First one is the shadow under her chin which I think is making her neck look dirty or dark at the least and the second is the highlight on her forehead, much too strong. In my opinion the photo would be better if You included both hands, the stretched-out arm leads the eye out of the frame. I would give Your picture a 6. The model is a 10, no question.
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Len Webster
{K:25714} 10/23/2005
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Perhaps a little glaring in the background, but the 'look' and pose are fantastic.
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jacques brisebois
{K:73883} 10/23/2005
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you really have a nice model. don't stop showing us her pics. You have nice lightning and composition in that pic.
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