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Critique By:
Susan Hernandez (K:6487)
6/14/2006 6:24:46 PM
First of all let me welcome you to UF, this shot is awesome, very nice cool colors and with a interesting composition, well done and can't wait to see your next shot 
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Critique By:
Susan Hernandez (K:6487)
6/14/2006 6:20:13 PM
Awesome abstract shot, love the texture and color, excellent work!
Thank you for the comment on my photo
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Critique By:
Robert Kocs (K:89085)
5/21/2006 7:59:09 AM
Absolutely nice abstract details and exciting composition.
Love the stillness colourtones, the details are superb!
Great abstract photograph dear Ray!
Best wishes!
Robert
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Critique By:
Ordilei Caldeira (K:2545)
5/7/2006 3:13:52 PM
very good detail and capture.
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Critique By:
Yutaka Itinose (K:22586)
5/3/2006 7:38:49 AM
Yes,wall this is, what a eye capturing this simple wall with modest colours,great! Thanks good comment on my green tears,if I can I will immediately send it for you though,it's my friend's old cottage,so big.Anyway,very thanks.I'm so glad to know you.See you Ray.
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Critique By:
Yutaka Itinose (K:22586)
5/3/2006 7:33:01 AM
finest! dear Ray, thanks good comment on my pics,very very cool photo,esp.so bold composition and beautiful colours, super abstracts.
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Critique By:
Ray Hudson (K:970)
5/2/2006 6:04:47 AM
Robert,
I've been looking at this and I think I see what you mean - and I think I agree as well! Thanks for the thoughtful comments.
Ray
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Critique By:
Ray Hudson (K:970)
5/2/2006 6:03:28 AM
Csaba - thanks for the nice comment - it's always nice when someone likes something this abstract - I appreciate it.
Ray
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Critique By:
Ray Hudson (K:970)
5/2/2006 6:01:03 AM
Hugo,
Thanks for the thoughtful comment. I myself think something could be slightly different, not sure what. I like this as is, but as someone else notes, it is 'formal' and ever so slightly static.
Ray
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Critique By:
Ray Hudson (K:970)
5/2/2006 5:58:36 AM
Megan,
Thanks for the comment.
Ray
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Critique By:
. . (K:909)
5/2/2006 4:40:15 AM
very nice ....................... z
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Critique By:
. . (K:909)
5/2/2006 4:37:40 AM
superb work .......... the level of shapness works exceptionally well here
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Critique By:
Alan Orr (K:9671)
5/1/2006 6:28:26 PM
Very nice colors and textures in this abstract.Very metallic.
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Critique By:
Robert Höhne (K:4290)
5/1/2006 7:10:33 AM
This is great Ray, it could have been made more dynamic by coming in from the right more making the bottom line angle up more but then that may not be what you wanted. In this way it has an air of formality about it and yet not formal to the point of being stiff and unyielding.
Excellent.
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Critique By:
Robert Höhne (K:4290)
5/1/2006 7:07:35 AM
great abstract, well captured textures
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Critique By:
Csaba Molnár (K:5732)
5/1/2006 6:59:38 AM
Very nice metallic abstract vision with great colours and details, I like it!
Best regards.
Csaba
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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
5/1/2006 6:08:57 AM
Hi Ray, very cool shot, the composition, allowing the blue line from bottom to top creates a very dynamic effect. I think you've captured the metal look with it's brushed structure very well, and razor sharp. Very good abstract.
Looking at this photo, I cannot suppress the feeling you could've gotten more out of it if you'd used a stronger / more extreme diagonal in the composition, allowing the blue stripe run from lower left to upper right. Not sure if that's possible, though, but I think it would make the composition just that little extra more inviting.
Good shot, though.
Cheers,
Hugo
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Critique By:
Megan Irwin (K:1666)
5/1/2006 5:38:10 AM
I like this shot. It's very abstract.
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