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Critique By:
Jason Mckeown (K:22200)
11/1/2006 11:45:49 PM
Hi Marcus, its time for my two cents worth.
first thing i would of done is to take this a little bit earlier in the evening so to get good separation between the skyline and the sky.
Second thing you could of done is to make the aperature smaller, mine are normally shot at between 15 and 60 second so an fstop of f16 to f22 is perfect and gives you a very sharp image.
If you were after the moon in the shot as is this is a great job for PS, shoot for the moon then shot for the city then merge them in PS.
Last thing Marcus it looks to be oversharpened, that is one of the things i found to be the hardest to come to grips with as at one point it doesn't look sharp then next its oversharp. what way do you sharpen your images?
hope this hepls a bit mate
Jason
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Photo By: Marcus Armani
(K:36599)
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Critique By:
Jason Mckeown (K:22200)
10/16/2005 5:31:15 AM
Fantasic shot the colour have been rendered beautifully, the lighting is perfect, with the spots of light perfectly placed. The perspective and the lines leeds you perfectly though the frame to all the sublects
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| Photo By: Sergio Leal
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