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Critique By:
Roger Skinner (K:81846)
10/5/2008 10:24:38 PM
beautiful girl but the pose is wrong.. her legs have disappeared so if you crop the top out that might help but in all seriousness I would re pose her... try this too last thing you do before you depress the shutter button is to run your eye round the periphery of the viewfinder, this has two effects 1 You see the odd things about the shot.. ie trees poking into peoples heads and stuff like that and second you detach from the centre of interest the thing you are hot to photograph and simply see an image as the camera sees it. I cropped it according to my taste in order to tidy it up, but it would be better cropped in camera so you dont lose image size and so on.. hope you dont mind
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| Photo By: Srna Stankovic
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Critique By:
Roger Skinner (K:81846)
3/25/2005 11:42:00 PM
Great idea and nice light and use of it Amanda..just wonder if it had been vertical (portrait) might it have had a bit more clout. But it is a lovely pool of light there in that picnic area for sure.. you were lucky to get it without any cars there. Did you see any Lyre birds while u were there? there's usually heaps running round under those pines
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| Photo By: Amanda Dowell
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