I'm glad you got a kick out of Spenc's comment... hehehe... Since I just answered you from my email I forgot what he said, so I had to review it... LOL...
What does he mean by using a fill flash, or even more fill flash when you are 30-50 yards away using a 70-200mm zoom while the subject is in motion... hehehe
Maybe I should have asked the model and the water to stop, while I set the lighting up... ROTFLMAO...
For this image, I'd suggest putting a bit more flash on the subject in order to bring out her eyes. (They are a bit dark)
Anywho, just thought I'd let ya know I've left usefilm.com permanently due to them not removing your blantant abusive statements. Aka, attacking personality & me personally rather than any critique on the photograph. In fact, you went considerably over the line into extreme verbal abuse. Enjoy usefilm - all of those here, enjoy it as well. I simply won't put up with a website that tolerates such blantant abuse.
As for this image here - it is rather flat and her face seems to be slightly out of foucs. Using some or more fill flash on the subject would have helped considerably. Also, her expression is somewhat lackluster - while this may be a great expression on her if you know her personally, from an outside perspective, it doesn't seem to be at the pennicle of the emotion.
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