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Critique By:
David April (K:81)
5/8/2003 8:55:59 PM
you did a nice job framing this shot Carol. I like how the middle of the foreground gate lines up so well with the edge of the tunnel in the background and edge macthes the door on the left. There is also good pattern repetition with the arches.
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| Photo By: Carol Watson
(K:5185)
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Critique By:
David April (K:81)
5/5/2003 8:16:54 PM
I like the simple 2 color treatment you've used here. Great use of negative space. The man at the top has a great pose, really nice and relaxed. I'm not so sure about the one on the bottom though - I'd like to see more of his arm and hand to give a better sense of the object he's leaning on.
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| Photo By: tarjei ekenes krogh
(K:776)
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Critique By:
David April (K:81)
5/5/2003 2:38:17 PM
very moody shot, I like it - it has a futuristic, science fiction torture chamber look to it. It does though, appear a bit underexposed to me, especially around the bottom of the containers.
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| Photo By: Paolo Cardone
(K:1161)
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Critique By:
David April (K:81)
5/4/2003 8:55:43 PM
what a beautiful smile on a lovely young lady. I like the big swooping curve of her hat. I do agree with Bob's comment though, that the twigs and ornamentation on the hat in the top right of the frame are competing with the subject's face, dimishing the impact. The is also a distracting element in the face of the person in the background just over her shoulder.
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| Photo By: Brian Steele
(K:620)
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Critique By:
David April (K:81)
5/4/2003 11:16:51 AM
I like the wide framing of this shot Leonie. There is good balance with the buildings. Also the low, wide buildings contrast nicely with the tall thin windmill. I've never seen the circular bales stored like that. I think this work work very well as a black and white shot as well.
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| Photo By: Leonie Fitzpatrick
(K:40551)
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Critique By:
David April (K:81)
5/3/2003 10:27:04 PM
what a great job of getting the bug's eye view here! The daffodils really look like they are towering over your head as giants. a shame that the sky is completely blown out, though.
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| Photo By: Arthur Yeo
(K:890)
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Critique By:
David April (K:81)
5/3/2003 7:05:25 PM
beautiful composition. your tones are perfect. I love the white-blond hilights in the hair. Ordinarily, I'd say that the wall shadow is a distraction, but I think it works fine here in this frame balancing out the brighter white of the wall on the right. nice job.
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| Photo By: Gabriella Smit
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