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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
12/4/2006 2:12:39 PM
That's not a critique. You are responding to this art form as if you were browsing porn sites.
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
12/2/2006 4:52:28 PM
Aron
your style of portraiture is very cool. i like the closeness, lighting and angles.
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| Photo By: Aron Molnar
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
12/1/2006 2:32:58 PM
great angle, great lighting, and excellent composition. bravo!
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| Photo By: A. W. Osnafotos
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 11:50:39 PM
this is great for a grabshot. the light was really working for you. often you catch moments like these that are great but technically a disaster. well done
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| Photo By: Larry Fosse
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 7:49:12 PM
I showed this to my cousin who is an accomplished artist and he walked me through these changes. It's truer to what you did with a half degree rotation and light cropping all around. contrast and level adjustments too.
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| Photo By: Joel Aron
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 6:59:37 PM
I think you were trying to frame the square containing the hands. If you turned it a degree and cropped the right side to match the left, you'd have something good too.
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| Photo By: Joel Aron
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 6:57:54 PM
Joel
I forgot to mention that I turned the image one degree before I cropped it.
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| Photo By: Joel Aron
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 6:56:04 PM
Joel
I am so glad you appreciate my comments and aren't offended. You may have been learning but you have a great eye now and you will only improve. I appreciate your compliments. I often wonder if I am qualified to critique others. We like certain images for different reasons. A non biased eye is always good for positive suggestions.
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| Photo By: Joel Aron
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 4:20:51 PM
i love this series. i am jealous that you had access to such a cool building. I'd like to take some images in downtown Cleveland but my safety concerns me. Atlanta and Dallas have great buildings too but I didn't have a chance to shoot in either city.
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| Photo By: Joel Aron
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 4:17:58 PM
cool shot. i like your eye for abstracts.
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| Photo By: Joel Aron
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 4:14:44 PM
great pattern and the time of day really made interesting shadows. If it were possible, a tighter zoom would improve this.
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| Photo By: Joel Aron
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 4:12:15 PM
fun idea. composition is everything so i played with it. i adjusted the contrast some. i hope you don't mind me doing this. a goal of this site is to learn from others. the subject doesn't need to be centered. centering is fine if you are going for dead-on symmetry.
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| Photo By: Joel Aron
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 4:06:00 PM
i think the color cast takes away from this image. the orientation in the frame could be improved by putting it in a third.
I made some adjustments to show you what I mean.
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| Photo By: Joel Aron
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 4:01:44 PM
this is very cool. i love architecture shots. i have a few on my page. let me know what you think.
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| Photo By: Joel Aron
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/30/2006 3:50:07 PM
so many people have done shots like these but they always seem to please my eye. very well done. the presence of people adds a lot.
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| Photo By: carla slaviero
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/27/2006 9:22:17 PM
this is wonderful!
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| Photo By: Leo Régnier Я£
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/27/2006 9:20:25 PM
This is beautiful BUT i think it could use a small amount of cropping on the right so the branch is not so centered. very well seen. sharp too.
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| Photo By: Leo Régnier Я£
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/27/2006 9:12:26 PM
some more DOF would improve this very nice abstract.
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| Photo By: Agon Nimani
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/27/2006 9:11:42 PM
i would cut off about one fifth from the bottom. a reflection of something i can't see looks odd to me. nice capture regardless!
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| Photo By: sara sue
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/13/2006 2:50:35 PM
great image. i love this sort of work.
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| Photo By: Dino Tsinonis
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/11/2006 10:32:52 PM
my guess is that the silhouette was deliberate. lovely!!
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| Photo By: Özgür Ersin
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/10/2006 10:34:52 PM
wonderful image! her eyes are so bright and clear. a benefit of youth.
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| Photo By: Marta Azevedo
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/10/2006 10:32:35 PM
it looks like the front and the back at the same time. a tighter crop would be more interesting
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| Photo By: Amr Hussien
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/10/2006 10:29:59 PM
wonderful crop. great portrait showing emotion
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| Photo By: Aron Molnar
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/10/2006 10:27:27 PM
you should have zoomed in to get a more interesting photo.
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| Photo By: umut atalay
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/10/2006 6:18:02 PM
this was one of those pictures inside a picture. An added bonus. thanks for your compliment.
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| Photo By: Jim Greenfield
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/8/2006 10:17:13 PM
this is VERY cool but I'd prefer to see it vertical. great DOF. if it were blurred at all, it would ruined this.
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| Photo By: Edward Molnar
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/2/2006 4:31:49 PM
that tamron 24-135. i haven't paid attention to what lens you use until today. i wasn't referencing the lens to the photo. it was just a general comment.
you're welcome.
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| Photo By: Andrew Caldwell
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/2/2006 3:10:42 PM
this is fantastic. i love automotive photography.
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| Photo By: Giulio Rotelli
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Critique By:
Jim Greenfield (K:5172)
11/2/2006 3:00:16 PM
this is the coolest image. I have that same lens. It's very nice.
I hope your dad was a kind man and you have good memories of him. I won't be that lucky. This is a nice way to commemorate his passing.
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| Photo By: Andrew Caldwell
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