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Critique By:
Mark Wakefield (K:481)
10/14/2007 6:00:37 PM
Hi Martin, "Missed the point" I think I did. It was just the sky was so white in places that I was convinced it was burnt out. I must admit I find mist very difficult to photograph well I think you always need something looming in the background to show it is actually misty.
Regards
Mark
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Critique By:
Martin Halley (K:580)
10/14/2007 5:49:42 PM
Mark, I like your addition of the sky but I think you have missed the point of the photo, it was heavy mist and the sky is not visible at all instead there are sheets of rain. I felt the idea of the vessel having sailed out of the fog made it all work well. Indeed I have since removed the entire background and feel that it is even better. Your comment has, however, made me wonder if I am on entirely the wrong track.
Like you, I also have a library of skies and so will look at the various possibilities to see what can be done, yours is certainly interesting but to my eye is not an overall improvement. More to follow .....
Thanks for the interest and constructive critisism, always welcomed.
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Critique By:
Gary Auerbach (K:3935)
10/14/2007 1:40:30 PM
Simple and very beautiful. thanks....
Gary
www.WeWalkinBeauty.com
www.garyauerbach.com
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Critique By:
Mark Wakefield (K:481)
10/14/2007 8:29:21 AM
Hi Martin, I had a go a tweaking this picture to add some sky and demonstrate what I mean.
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Critique By:
Mark Wakefield (K:481)
10/14/2007 7:24:27 AM
You have talent Martin but I think it's time you moved on to an DSLR to give you the greater control over exposures and depth of field etc. Have you considered a DSLR?
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Critique By:
Mark Wakefield (K:481)
10/14/2007 7:19:23 AM
Hi Martin, A shot with great potential, I like the composition but the the exposure leaves a lot to be desired, the sky is totally burnt out. If you get the chance to re-shoot and take two exposures one for the sky and the other for the foreground and then combine them in Photoshop or Photoshop Elements. It would make a great B&W especially if you could take it with a moody brooding sky.
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Critique By:
Billy Bloggs (K:51043)
10/13/2007 9:54:39 PM
You've composed this well. The mist certainly adds atmosphere. It's almost monochrome and I wonder whether it might have more impact converted.
Regards, Gary
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Critique By:
AJ Miller (K:49168)
10/6/2007 1:08:01 PM
Taking drops shots to another dimension. Beautifully done - I'm impressed by the sharpness of this.
AJ
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Critique By:
AJ Miller (K:49168)
10/6/2007 1:03:20 PM
A fine shot that got me thinking. And a funny comment. Now, put it all back together.
AJ
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Critique By:
Urs Rubin (K:5172)
9/27/2007 12:10:30 PM
A wonderful, melodramatic picture, perfectly seen and arranged, I like it very much! 7+++! Best wishes, Urs
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Critique By:
M jalili (K:69009)
9/27/2007 12:10:06 PM
Massive ..................
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Critique By:
John Pitman (K:8473)
9/27/2007 1:40:32 AM
Love the toning and detail.
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Critique By:
Mitra Nademi-Nassari (K:28234)
9/26/2007 10:08:53 PM
Excellent!
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Critique By:
Avi (K:70138)
9/26/2007 9:54:33 PM
Brilliant.. mood, tone, everything exceptional !!
Cheers ! 
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Critique By:
Golboo Fiuzy (K:2359)
9/26/2007 9:41:48 PM
Perfect picture.
Sepia and composition are great.
Bravo.
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Critique By:
Frank Mercer (K:1925)
9/26/2007 9:33:07 PM
Excellent!! Well done.
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Critique By:
M jalili (K:69009)
9/26/2007 9:29:14 PM
Masive ............
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Critique By:
Banie Prinsloo (K:1089)
7/3/2007 12:09:34 PM
Great Work. It Must Have Been Fun At The Expo.
Love It
Banie
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Critique By:
Atish Sen (K:6346)
5/25/2007 6:45:28 PM
Nice macro
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Critique By:
Andras Kocsis (K:1543)
5/25/2007 10:25:20 AM
Nice macro pic! Good DOF and cropping! I have never seen this kind of a bee.
Best regards
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Critique By:
Hussam AL_ Khoder (K:79545)
5/25/2007 8:33:50 AM
]¦[ I love this photo ]¦[
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Critique By:
Hussam AL_ Khoder (K:79545)
5/25/2007 8:31:43 AM
§*)§®¤*~ˆ° Excellent macro §*)§®¤*~ˆ°
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Critique By:
Joe Johnson (K:8529)
5/25/2007 8:21:10 AM
Just right. Beautifully done.
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Critique By:
Sandor Szollos (K:7681)
5/25/2007 8:01:31 AM
Very good macro photo,great colors and DOF.
Regards
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Critique By:
Susan Jennifer (K:39)
5/25/2007 6:10:14 AM
I love the colors and contrast. Wow!!
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Critique By:
Geoff Ball (K:3375)
5/25/2007 6:01:02 AM
Nice Shot,
Spent more then a few minutes while trying to get one to pose for me in my crabapple tree, alas to my regret he evaded me :)
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Critique By:
Rainy Iannucci (K:263)
5/25/2007 1:33:33 AM
Great photo Martin. Stunning detail and contrast. If I were to do anything different I would try to find someway to exclude the flower on the left or maybe crop it out so the focus is just on the flower in the middle. Nice work.
Rainy Iannucci
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Critique By:
Jan Hoffman (K:39467)
5/17/2007 7:39:16 PM
Martin -- Wonderful results and very amusing. Post processing is top notch and the desired effect obviously was successful.
--Best regards, Jan
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Critique By:
Rose Hare (K:2523)
5/17/2007 1:14:11 PM
Wow, Great photo.
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Critique By:
abhra aich (K:8830)
5/15/2007 4:15:41 PM
I would call it an abstract but a nice one..
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