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Critique By:
Stephen Rogers (K:3370)
10/26/2004 1:24:24 AM
Nice artwork. I like the way you have transformed this image.
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Critique By:
Gabrielle Willson (K:7978)
10/26/2004 1:22:32 AM
Ooops in need of a little work before you can go anywhere...
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Critique By:
Shawn McCammon (K:172)
10/25/2004 9:47:34 PM
I think it might be the remains of a hay baler, but I don't know enough about old farm stuff to be sure. I think I only own half of it. The tree growing through the middle of it is right on the property line  Hopefully in a couple of months most of the weeds will be gone and my skills might be improved enough for some better shots.
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Critique By:
Di Ciuccio Maurizio (K:57398)
10/25/2004 9:46:26 PM
thanks to she true McCammon..un appeal to to have it conosciuta..seguiro' your photos .. good job for the photography and the restauro..a soon
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Critique By:
Shawn McCammon (K:172)
10/25/2004 9:40:00 PM
Ringraziarla per guardare la mia foto e dare le sue parole gentili. La fotografia è nuova a noi ha tuttavia molto di imparare, ma mi diverto. Questo pulito il pavimento è stato fatto in Italia in 1953 per la società di Rioni di Montgomery. L'ho trovato un anno fa in un vicino barn. Spero di restaurarlo un giorno. Lavoro anche su Harley cosí lo stile interessato a me. Sono spiacente se il mio italiano è povero. Il software di traduzione non è sempre esatto e parlo soltanto inglese e dello spagnolo.
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Critique By:
Peter Daniel (K:33866)
10/25/2004 9:34:44 PM
Interesting shot... We call this a "2 Wheel Do-Hickie" or back 40 "whatchamacallit".. ;~] LOL
Thanks for sharing....
Peter Daniel
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Critique By:
Di Ciuccio Maurizio (K:57398)
10/25/2004 7:57:41 PM
this ciclomotore has something of mythical the harley..piacevole foto..come all the altre..complimenti
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Critique By:
Tahsin Bakr (K:3298)
10/25/2004 11:35:31 AM
M . I . A - R . I . P
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Critique By:
ISMAEL MARCOS (K:10535)
10/24/2004 7:48:16 PM
LO SIENTO NO ME GUSTA NADA
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Critique By:
Michael Holm (K:7931)
10/24/2004 10:54:57 AM
this is a very arty body style...too bad it's not sharp...great old colors...mike
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Critique By:
LaMaro Hall (K:3658)
10/24/2004 9:05:12 AM
I like the colors but ouch, don't look at it too long it hurts
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Critique By:
Cheryl Ogle (K:24494)
10/24/2004 5:30:04 AM
Shawn - the "grain effect" of this one was the "noise" in the other I was talking about. I hadn't seen this one yet. You are also playing with color I see... Isn't it fun? Enjoy. You have some great ideas to work with there.
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Critique By:
Cheryl Ogle (K:24494)
10/24/2004 5:28:15 AM
Shawn, I love this photo. I did a few variations on the B&W theme and a little color enhancement (there is a lot of green in the photo above in the tire). You could have fun and do a little Andy Warhol but I think the photo is great on it's own. Is it one you are also salvaging? Great idea. I have been playing with layers the "desaturate" then bring in the color from the bottom layer. I love the red in this photo so I made that post also come in with the motorcycle. Makes it look a little hand tinted.
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Critique By:
Abeer Al Jarsh (K:10209)
10/24/2004 5:15:04 AM
this is a nice shot but the colours are very harsh
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Critique By:
Shawn McCammon (K:172)
10/24/2004 2:12:06 AM
Hi Robin, Thanks for checking out some of my work. I'm having some technical issues right now. It seems that my camera is only compatible with my laptop, My internet conection only works well on my new desktop, and some of my editing software only works on my old desktop. The self portrait was taken during my frustration I changed it to something a little friendlier. I have learned a few things already. One thing that I have noticed is that I seem to be more aware of the details in the world around me. That could be useful in many ares of life. See you soon. Shawn
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Critique By:
Shawn McCammon (K:172)
10/24/2004 1:09:16 AM
Hi again Cheryl, As a newbie, I don't know all of the language yet. Please define "noise". Thanks for checking back and offering advice. Shawn
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Critique By:
Khaled Mursi Hammoud (K:54005)
10/24/2004 12:54:08 AM
Nice abstract and colors although little bit hazy.
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Critique By:
Cheryl Ogle (K:24494)
10/24/2004 12:50:05 AM
I like the B&W better than the color, perhaps a little less noise would be good too (for people like me who have terrible eyes). I like the texture of the background for this shot - great suggestion.
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Critique By:
Cheryl Ogle (K:24494)
10/24/2004 12:48:12 AM
Ahhh ha- well that took care of the distractions.
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Critique By:
Robin Dunham (K:1851)
10/23/2004 10:46:40 PM
Hey Shawn,
Welcome to Usefilm! I like this image!
Looks like you are getting some good constructive comments so far. But have someone take a less intimidating photo of yourself > You look ready to spit nails. ;p
I know You have a creative mind, have fun with the photography. Sometimes working with a new medium can inspire creativity in other areas.
Have fun,
Robin
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Critique By:
Shawn McCammon (K:172)
10/23/2004 3:10:15 PM
Gracias para sus comentarios. El color es la luz del sol natural reflejado en el metal descubierto. El único redacción era para el brillo.
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Critique By:
Dubravko Grakalic (K:25235)
10/23/2004 1:51:45 PM
nice, "vintage" look!
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Critique By:
Rosa Maria Rejas (K:705)
10/23/2004 1:16:06 PM
mu buena fotografía. Está genial, en especial los colores que lograste... felicitaciones
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Critique By:
Shawn McCammon (K:172)
10/23/2004 4:30:17 AM
I took your advice and did this one in b&w. I like it, The b&w really highlights the textures. Thanks for the suggestion.
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Critique By:
J. P. (K:4)
10/22/2004 10:59:51 PM
try autolevels on PS (foog)
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Critique By:
Shawn McCammon (K:172)
10/22/2004 10:59:36 PM
Michael, This is a hybrid mutt that I am building from spare parts. The frame started as a Triumph 750 and got some angles changed and a Harley rear section. The Triumph engine no longer fits. I'm planning to put a Kawasaki 400 in it this winter.
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Critique By:
Shawn McCammon (K:172)
10/22/2004 10:55:16 PM
These photos are from a work in progress series that I did some time back. Nothing in this shot is for sale. I'm not sure of the ethics of posting any of my actual sale items on a site like this. Thanks for the pointers.
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Critique By:
Shawn McCammon (K:172)
10/22/2004 10:50:07 PM
Thanks for the input. It really is helpful to get advice from folks who know a lot more than I do. This is the same frame from "rough" after being cleaned and painted. The pictures are part of an old work in progress series. I am posting them because they are typical of the results I usually get.
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Critique By:
Cheryl Ogle (K:24494)
10/22/2004 7:22:24 PM
Hey Shawn. I agree with Jon. In this shot, I wasn't sure what you are "selling" - is it the reflector/shield or the mirrors. I see the red in the motorcyle more than anything. I know how hard a product shot can be. Look online to see "how-to's" by searching with Google, etc. Type in "product shot how to's" and see if anything comes up. Also - type in "photoshop how to's" and see if any sites offer help on editing them. Good luck to you and your business.
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Critique By:
Cheryl Ogle (K:24494)
10/22/2004 7:16:01 PM
Shawn - A few things I've learned:
When shooting the parts you may want to cover up the table with a sheet (clean one) to keep the focus on the part you photograph. Also - try to stay away from busy backgrounds (the fence has so much texture the eye is drawn to it). A simple wall or again sheet backdrop may help keep the eye trained. Make sure the sheets are not in the same color group as the part so it doesn't blend in. Good luck to you. Cheryl
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