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Critique By:
John Doe (K:170)
4/2/2002 7:23:04 PM
I'm with Charles, I like this. Great lighting. The model's pose makes you wonder what she was thinking.
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Critique By:
Charles Hess (K:-183)
4/2/2002 5:55:48 PM
Kind of an off-beat, but effective image that is hard to critique. I think some will like it, others not. I like it and would love to see other images of this very cute model.
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
3/25/2002 4:47:31 PM
hello Terrence,
Thanks for the comments.
It was exactly my intentions to post this photo the way you describe it.
As this is from a contact sheet. I wanted it more artsy (IMHO) looking than technically anything. I wanted the frames to show the negs.
Your opinion is appreciated, though.
Lyza P.
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Critique By:
Terrence Kent (K:7023)
3/23/2002 8:40:05 AM
Looks interesting in the floating dreamy way it has going for it, tone definitely helps that, but the light fall off on the left side, small display size, and messy presentation make it more difficult to critique
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
3/20/2002 8:27:04 AM
Unique framing and a great pose. This is an eye catcher! I like the vibrant yellow backgrond! His face seems a tad washed out, though, since his body is quite tanned.
Great shot!
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Critique By:
Samuel Downs (K:7290)
3/17/2002 11:12:30 PM
Lyza, Interesting angle. Great shot! Sam
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
3/11/2002 1:09:42 AM
Hi Alisa,
Thanks so much.
I do enjoy this little camera and don't really feel like it is a toy (as others perceive it to be) 
Yeah, if you can one it can be quite addicting to use it.
Take care.
Lyza
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
12/4/2001 10:18:50 PM
Thanks Nanette.
Yes, I may need more DOF , but it is a LOMO I am using here.
I actually have a copy of this which has been cropped at the bottom part to show more of the image as an abstract.
But I preferred to show it as the architecture of the DC airport in a different light and for some reason the yellow showed more that afternoon.
Lyza P.
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
12/1/2001 6:12:44 AM
I've been reading the comments and have to agree with what has been said. I would like to see that building in the middle of the bolt dead center. What a fun and interesting project to pursue with this eyebolt. Great find Lyza.
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Critique By:
Chelsea Burke (K:5750)
11/28/2001 10:50:21 AM
I can see what you've tried to do with this shot, good idea. But you need to get much closer to the bolt to
make it work. There is far too much out-of-focus foreground and sky for this to be effective. Also, the bolt
needs to be in focus at this range. Perhaps try this again if possible, get much closer to the bolt. Take a lower
perspective, gaze around from different angles and see what is " framed" within the bolt. Lot's of possibilities
here, well worth another try.
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Critique By:
Jeremy Tavan (K:32)
11/27/2001 10:21:40 PM
What this really needs is an in-focus foreground and some interesting subject framed by the bolt. Doesn't have to be a naked woman, but it's a thought. Sort of a peeping-tom look. As far as focus control is concerned, I don't think you have that with your Lomo. But it would help.
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Critique By:
Ted Williams (K:324)
11/27/2001 10:35:22 AM
I like the use of light too.
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Critique By:
al shaikh (K:15790)
11/10/2001 11:45:13 AM
I had to do a doubletake on this one. It really is a fun photograph. Thank's for sharing.
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Critique By:
Chris Whaley (K:3847)
11/10/2001 12:17:07 AM
lol...i think this is one of the craziest photos i have seen...i love it....a gian pizza cutter on a mission!...all it needs is a dog running after it and it would win an emmy.
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Critique By:
Chris Whaley (K:3847)
11/9/2001 6:27:34 PM
At first i thought it was a giant roller skating wheel cruising by on the sidewalk...sooooo surreal....great job. My mind is still having a hard time believing its not moving.
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
11/9/2001 3:33:56 PM
Nanette and Detlef,
Thanks very much for the comments.
I also like the pose , unfortunately that's what I filled the frame in so it is kind of cut off ( her hands, thighs and hips). I might have to educate myself more on my scanner
as it has blurred the image. Also I actually put a diffuser filter on the camera lens.
It was actually my intention to do this. To do a hard look and show a come-hither soft aspect.
Hoping I make sense.
thanks again.
Lyza P
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Critique By:
Debbie Groff (K:9569)
10/15/2001 5:38:08 AM
I like it. Quite interesting to be sure. Love the way the sun is shining on just the legs. How cool and to have seen this and wanting to snap at it is quite the interesting thought. Well seen Lyza..And also welcome to Usefilm. Have a ball and learn alot is what this site is all about; to me, anyway.
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
10/9/2001 1:48:27 PM
Detlef,
Thanks for the compliment.
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
10/8/2001 11:10:44 PM
Hello Arthur,
Thanks for the compliments.
I agree that the tulips'highlites look blown out.
I wanted to show more detail and maybe adjust the image thru phot shop...But I haven't figured it out YET.
And since I was experimenting with a flash here this is what I got. Or maybe I should concentrate more in my darkroom when printing the positive.
anyway..thank you.
Lyza P
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Critique By:
Arthur John Grossman III (K:1214)
10/7/2001 7:37:36 AM
Hey Lyza...The composition of this photograph really caught my eye. I also like the contrast and the feeling of movement in the image. Some small suggestions and strictly my personal opinion:
Some of the highlites seem blown out
I would like to see more focus on most of the flowers
Very nice!
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Critique By:
Chris Whaley (K:3847)
10/3/2001 9:07:45 PM
Cool shot Lyza.
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Critique By:
Marc Jacobson (K:4)
10/3/2001 4:20:11 PM
I like the subject, but I would ditch the teal border. It draws the eye away from the image. Spacey.
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Critique By:
Lyza Perrenoud (K:111)
10/2/2001 9:06:58 PM
for Vladimir,
Thanks for the comments.
It is much appreciated.
Helps with my learing and improvements.
Thanks again.
L.P
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